#294: The Wait
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gzero
Registered: Feb 20, 2008
Total Posts: 17
Country: Canada

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My first post. C&C more than welcome.

Beverly Guhl
Registered: Nov 11, 2006
Total Posts: 1782
Country: United States

Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.


FJR1
Registered: Jan 20, 2004
Total Posts: 1129
Country: United States

Nice color in your first post. Welcome and best of luck.--Frank


Steve Spencer
Registered: Nov 08, 2006
Total Posts: 3582
Country: Canada

Hi,

I really like the composition and the sky is gorgeous. Excellent first post. Good luck this week.

Steve S.


Carrol
Registered: Mar 05, 2006
Total Posts: 1623
Country: N/A

Beverly Guhl wrote:
Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.

Good advice!

Welcome to the forum.


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