I finally got somebody to model for me. I like the results, what do you guys think?









http://flickr.com/jake_kenney/

I really like the lighting on the first one. Definitely my favorite. Also enjoy the second one. Nice work.

Ya 1 and 2 are the best maybe 3 would work if her arm was down its kind of OOF for me.
Dave

The first one does a great job of making your model look good.

Very nice. She has a very mischievious look in #1.
#3 the arm isn't lit, so it looks just a bit odd.
Very lovley model, good shots otherwise.

I like the first - the others not so much. Maybe a little cool? Look a little oversharpened.

Hi Jake,

Very nice try. The first one indeed makes her look great. The pose in the second is not that good and makes her look bigger then she is. Clone out the spot on her elbow and the brawstrap. 3 is nice but for this shot I dont like her clothing. The last would be better if she was slightly more turned towards the camera I feel. The rearlighting which makes her hair look like it is on fire I could do without also. Also clone out the spot on her arm here.

Hope this doesnt sound too harsh. I think you did a ok job and especially the first is great.

Regards

Marnix

Thanks for all the feedback. For the last one, I really don't know why I used the rimlight, probably just because I felt obligated to use all my gear haha.