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Jake Kenney
Registered: Dec 31, 2006
Total Posts: 105
Country: United States

I finally got somebody to model for me. I like the results, what do you guys think?

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tol105
Registered: Mar 06, 2008
Total Posts: 13
Country: United States

I really like the lighting on the first one. Definitely my favorite. Also enjoy the second one. Nice work.



dtfuzzy
Registered: Nov 30, 2005
Total Posts: 144
Country: United States

Ya 1 and 2 are the best maybe 3 would work if her arm was down its kind of OOF for me.
Dave



SJMD
Registered: Nov 13, 2004
Total Posts: 12433
Country: United States

The first one does a great job of making your model look good.



Robert Pole
Registered: Apr 18, 2007
Total Posts: 11
Country: Canada

Very nice. She has a very mischievious look in #1.
#3 the arm isn't lit, so it looks just a bit odd.
Very lovley model, good shots otherwise.



paulhodson
Registered: Jul 22, 2003
Total Posts: 12342
Country: United Kingdom

I like the first - the others not so much. Maybe a little cool? Look a little oversharpened.



MarnixdS
Registered: Mar 04, 2005
Total Posts: 1207
Country: Netherlands

Hi Jake,

Very nice try. The first one indeed makes her look great. The pose in the second is not that good and makes her look bigger then she is. Clone out the spot on her elbow and the brawstrap. 3 is nice but for this shot I dont like her clothing. The last would be better if she was slightly more turned towards the camera I feel. The rearlighting which makes her hair look like it is on fire I could do without also. Also clone out the spot on her arm here.

Hope this doesnt sound too harsh. I think you did a ok job and especially the first is great.

Regards

Marnix



Jake Kenney
Registered: Dec 31, 2006
Total Posts: 105
Country: United States

Thanks for all the feedback. For the last one, I really don't know why I used the rimlight, probably just because I felt obligated to use all my gear haha.



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