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jvarszegi Registered: Jun 05, 2005 Total Posts: 2567 Country: N/A |
Thanks for looking. ![]() |
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Dave In La Registered: Jul 07, 2006 Total Posts: 5299 Country: United States |
where it's sharp, it is very sharp Jeff. |
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jvarszegi Registered: Jun 05, 2005 Total Posts: 2567 Country: N/A |
Thanks for looking. I intentionally shot it this way, with the OOF bloom on the left as part of the composition! |
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Tim Kuhn Registered: Nov 29, 2006 Total Posts: 5559 Country: United States |
I wouldn't say back to the drawing board! There are many great aspects to this photo, as Dave pointed out. I would look at it as one more opinion to keep in mind, one more aspect of comp to be cognitive of. These things all help us. One thing to keep in mind with comp is simple, simple and simple. This is still a pleasing image. |
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Karl Witt Registered: Jul 11, 2007 Total Posts: 6653 Country: United States |
Pleasing light, nice color, not oversaturated. A fine example, and you realized it too how delicate the subject is and how little it takes to take away from it. OOF items can easily dominate, my eye tells me the one on the right is most distracting of the two because it appears as more just a 'hot spot' offering not color or detail. I am comfortable with the one on the left, my choice or suggestion would be to look at this by cropping up from bottom and cutting off the right OOF bloom, thus ending just below the bloom above it. Then possibly bringing in from the left to a comfort level balance. |
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Shasoc Registered: Aug 24, 2005 Total Posts: 11785 Country: United States |
When I took a short course in composition (some years ago) my teacher always used to say: "Make it simple!", and I always try to follow that advice. Your shot is very nice, well balanced and nicely lit and framed (eventhough the subject looks too centered). However if you call this shot "A butterfly" the viewer expect a butterfly to be the focal point of the image. IMHO there are some distracting elements (the eyes always go to the brightest part of the image: the OOF flower in the bottom left of the image and the flower on the right side). So my advise would be to try to get closer to the subject (this makes the viewer more emotionally involved in the image), trying to isolated the butterfly from the bg, in order to make it stand out. Very simple. |
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Lil Judd Registered: Oct 19, 2007 Total Posts: 6910 Country: United States |
Beautiful butterfly, |