comments welcome!!!
Setup- flash, no flashes, used reflector to bounce the light to hit the two models.

PP- cropping none.
Noise Ninja
and healing spot to get rid of blemish on the legs or bruises.

i think the lighting is interesting but the bottom right corner spoils the mood-might help to crop it out, clone it out, etc.-the problem is see with this shot is in their posture/body language-it's obvious they're cramped, which results in a slightly hunched posture

daniel

Awkward poses. Detracts from their beauty.

I hope this comment helps you.

I agree with SH, awkward poses. Also the angle that they are shot from, it bring attention to their feet, and they are enlarged from the angle.

i would crop above the knee area but keep both hands in the frame. Like the light and color. Think the long legs bending to fit add to the awkward position.

Dress them up in some furry cave woman outfits start a small fire and keep that face expression the one that sas, be afraid of man.
Just a thought

Clever use the the reflector... I think the overall look if the models, cramped and all, fit the context of the location, especially the model on the right who has very apprehensive cowering body language. The one one the left looks a bit too relaxed and bored.... It would be a much more powerful image if you were to clone out the model on the left...

The girl in the green her stomach (due to pose) leaves a not so nice looking crease.

Sweet! Thanks guys for some awesome advices and comments, appreciated them all. I will work on them next time.

facial expressions are very uncomfortable (i don't mean to hurt your feelings with this comment at all and if i do i am sorry) they look like they are constipated

thats the only problem i have with the picture other wise i particularly like the background and the lighting

No feelings has been hurt, it actually gives me idea when other comments, improving is what I'm looking for or why else even post at all