Does this work?
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mabidally
Registered: May 11, 2006
Total Posts: 1289
Country: Sri Lanka

Hi folks,

I am more regular on the Nature and Wildlife forum just experimenting with some landscape after a recent visit to South Africa. Will really appreciate your comments on the below shot. I have used a little extreme processng to bring out the effects and colours. Does it work?



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Shores of Robben Island with Table Mountain in Distance


Alex
Registered: Oct 21, 2002
Total Posts: 307
Country: United States

I like it. Than again, I usually do quite heavy processing myself. Hard to tell it from the web picture but I would tone down the whites.

Alex



dnadal
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
Total Posts: 3163
Country: United States

The FG seems pretty soft, but that could be compression...the horizon right in the center makes for a static composition: what was it about the scene that made you want other people to see it? Find that element and use your comp tools to feature it. Dave



Amador
Registered: Jan 14, 2008
Total Posts: 104
Country: United States

It's not a bad shot, but I don't find it all that interesting. The foreground is a bit busy with the debris and the rocks blending together.



mooch
Registered: May 09, 2005
Total Posts: 1210
Country: United Kingdom

For me personally , i'd have walked on ten or so paces and begun from there , or am i missing some enviromental point your putting across ?



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