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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
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Jia Wang Registered: Apr 03, 2005 Total Posts: 120 Country: Singapore |
I like the way you processed this... Have always wanted to try it, but just not sure how... Great work |
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j.curtis Registered: May 02, 2004 Total Posts: 5563 Country: United States |
Great processing. Great image. Just not a fan of the crop. I would like to see more on the top. I feel it was cut a little tight at the top. The negative space on the sides don't do anything for the image IMO. |
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Jim Rickards Registered: Dec 02, 2003 Total Posts: 4204 Country: Canada |
Looks good, and nice lighting. I suppose your intent with the crop was to force us to concentrate on the eyes to mouth area and keep the eyes higher in the frame. |
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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
Jia Wang wrote: |
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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
j.curtis wrote: ![]() It is OK but I think the first one is to the point Edited by lazlo369 on May 07, 2008 at 10:35 PM GMT |
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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
Jim Rickards wrote: |
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liamh Registered: Jul 24, 2005 Total Posts: 1849 Country: United Kingdom |
Very nice. He reminds me a bit of the actor Bernard Hill before he got old and podgy. |
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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
liamh wrote: |
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Lee Wiren Registered: Nov 22, 2007 Total Posts: 131 Country: United States |
I really like the second shot better, I didn't like the way you cut off his chin in the first one or it would have been good. The processing is very good, my first thought was a tired trainworker not wanting to put up with any crap. |
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mosier Registered: Feb 02, 2008 Total Posts: 224 Country: United States |
Great shots, overall I like the second shot more. Not so much for the framing, but the eyes look more natural to me. There is so much going on in the eyes here. Awesome! Love the processing too |
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J Bond Registered: Feb 07, 2008 Total Posts: 115 Country: United States |
This first one has a lot more intensity for me and the second has more character. I enjoy the captures and your post work. |
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GenoDM Registered: Dec 12, 2007 Total Posts: 14 Country: United States |
Did you try it in B&W? |
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Alan Young Registered: Jan 19, 2007 Total Posts: 1290 Country: United Kingdom |
Great feeling in the shot lazlo, love the light |
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Dean DuBois Registered: Apr 22, 2005 Total Posts: 207 Country: United States |
The framing on the second shot is better but his eyes are more relaxed and the catchlight is not as well developed as compared to the first one. I like the look of your processing! |
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joerimaas Registered: Jun 10, 2006 Total Posts: 34 Country: Netherlands |
Best picture i have seen in a while, in my personal opinion. |
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Tony Masone Registered: Nov 15, 2006 Total Posts: 1124 Country: United States |
very dramatic. good job. |
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Ron Calef Registered: Dec 30, 2006 Total Posts: 139 Country: United States |
This image speaks to me - the whole composition is very well done. Color, saturation detail, cropping. I like the tight crop-nothing missing for me, it just leaves some mystery - like the log on his cap say, I am wondering. This is an unusual, memorable face - what a story there must be there. I just looked at a model lying in the mud - I didn't get it. |
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chickpiper Registered: Mar 13, 2005 Total Posts: 734 Country: United States |
Your treatment and view is always interesting. |
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oobie Registered: Dec 15, 2004 Total Posts: 1816 Country: United States |
In the first one it sorta looks like his lower eyelids (just around his eyes) are pinker than the rest of his skin. Sorta makes him look like those miners who get dust everywhere except around their eyes... |
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lazlo369 Registered: Mar 01, 2004 Total Posts: 5558 Country: United States |
Thank you guys so much for the kind comments. |
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liamh Registered: Jul 24, 2005 Total Posts: 1849 Country: United Kingdom |
I like the tight version, have you considered a square crop? |