Hello people,
Looking for some serious C&C. It was her first time doing a modeling/posing shoot and also my first time shooting someone for glam shots. I will post more images later

How do you add images guys? I tried adding one but it seems that it doesn't show up. Sorry, help me out and I'll post the images.

you cant upload images because you have no paid to become an image uploading member of the forums..
this means you cant upload a file directly from your computer..
however if you have uploaded the images to an external server, could be flickr or photobucket or redbubble, or just anything on the net, then you can put them in posts by copying the image address from the webpage (right click on the image) and then insert the image address to this code:

[frame ] add address of your image here [ /frame]

put the web address of the image between the two "frame" parts and it should hopefully work, i am new so not sure but give it a go.. make sure you do not include any spaces, especially in the frame parts

As described above you can link to most anywhere on the web. However you do not need any of the frame text. Just insert what is between the quotes below

"http://www...................jpg"

When you upload to a site like photobucket or imageshack, once you get the image linked, you need to put the photo in like this.

[ i m g ] (photo url goes here) [ / i m g ]

I had to separate the parts of img and /img or it would have given the appearance that I uploaded a shot. When you type it out, but those three letters together on the front, and at the back, no spacing at all.

Ok here goes another try:
Two for the moment, I'll have more up later

With one side of the face in shadow and very little light in the other eye its difficult to connect with #1. It's a nice facial angle but the lighting isn't doing anything to flatter her.

#2 has more engaging lighting on the face but has exposure issues. The red channel is completely blown on most of the face which is the cause of the burned out looking highlights. There is no compelling reason to nuke a background when shooting. Better to keep everything below the point of clipping in the camera then tweek as desired in Photoshop for reasons explained HERE

Chuck

Thanks Chuck, your explanation was very educational, thanks for the tip once again.

I like the first one. Lighting and pose
The second one kinda makes her arms look like a dwarf. Maybe if they were straight?