John & Tammie 3.15.08 <Kissing is the new selective coloring>
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scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
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Last wedding at Stockton Golf and Country Club. The plans were for an outdoor cermony on the 10th hole, with the river in the background. Do weddings ever go as planned? Weather brought us inside and we were only able to get a few outdoor shots. Open for critique. Yet on a preemptive note, please critique only if you have a website or have posted prior to this rant (thanks for the idea Sam).

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scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
Total Posts: 859
Country: United States

ok, how that one got resized I have no idea. I'll try to change it here after dinner. rip away!



JLinkowitz
Registered: May 15, 2005
Total Posts: 1010
Country: United States

Love #4 and #5 I think the tones in #5 are very nice, strong pp.

#6 looks a bit flat

#7 maybe add more contrast? (could be more what I would like though) and crop out the "smudge" finger/person on the right.


A.) I do have previous posts
B.) I do have a website but not linked to FM as I watch my hits. PM me if you are interested.



scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
Total Posts: 859
Country: United States

haha, didnt mean to be so harsh, but you know. thanks



scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
Total Posts: 859
Country: United States

haha, didnt mean to be so harsh, but you know. thanks



JLinkowitz
Registered: May 15, 2005
Total Posts: 1010
Country: United States

I know Scott, I was just being "Mr.Pissy Pants" for a minute. I can do that since it's my last few remaining days of Spring Break before going back to school (work) to see the smiling faces of my 110 students



Chris Cooke
Registered: Sep 20, 2007
Total Posts: 321
Country: United States

Nice work, good to see another Nor-Cal photographer around.



Kevin Dyck
Registered: Oct 09, 2003
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Country: Canada

Nice shots.

They look a bit chilly in #3. Did it cool off much with the rain?

K



scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
Total Posts: 859
Country: United States

Kevin Dyck wrote:
Nice shots.

They look a bit chilly in #3. Did it cool off much with the rain?

K


yeah, it rained a tad and the wind was crazy. i feel fortunate to have got a few shots out there, she was a trooper, because I know I was freezing.



Sam Hassas
Registered: Jul 11, 2007
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Country: United States

Hey I reconcnize these folks. Good stuff Scott. 5 is cool, will work great for a backdrop on he album. Where did the flash from 7 come from, nice.



scott shoemake
Registered: Apr 21, 2007
Total Posts: 859
Country: United States

Sam Hassas wrote:
Hey I reconcnize these folks. Good stuff Scott. 5 is cool, will work great for a backdrop on he album. Where did the flash from 7 come from, nice.



You...thanks.



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