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kierontan Registered: Oct 20, 2004 Total Posts: 26 Country: Philippines |
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Sam Hassas Registered: Jul 11, 2007 Total Posts: 2131 Country: United States |
It's good design and very hip with the times however I'm not confident it will be timeless. Less is more really works when designing an album. Looks like you have great PS skills, I'd just tone it down. |
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Dawei Ye Registered: Sep 15, 2007 Total Posts: 733 Country: Australia |
These look really pro! The only thing I don't like is the lines going through the faces on 1 and 3. |
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Lord Fluff Registered: Jun 08, 2005 Total Posts: 1940 Country: United Kingdom |
Beautifully done. However they do look like a brochure more than an album (to me) - there's not much sense of the actual day or people coming through - I just see the layouts as a whole. A lot of the design elements seem quite random too - especially in number 3. |
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sboerup Registered: Oct 13, 2005 Total Posts: 3183 Country: United States |
I'd 2nd the 'brochure' look. You have beautiful design capabilities, but to me it seems more about the design than the day to remember. |
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herby Registered: Jan 31, 2007 Total Posts: 186 Country: United States |
these are great.. |
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tsmith00 Registered: Sep 25, 2005 Total Posts: 61 Country: United States |
One thing that I learned at WPPI during the album competition was that the judges frowned on text on every page in one album. I know these are just a few of your samples, but I'd keep from putting text on every page. But hey I think they look great....besides what do I know?....lol |
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Cathy Yount Registered: Oct 01, 2007 Total Posts: 525 Country: United States |
+1 on the busyness of the album design |
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kierontan Registered: Oct 20, 2004 Total Posts: 26 Country: Philippines |
Thank you very much for your suggestions, will try to improve next time. All your ideas and tips are very helpful. |
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Todd Ramsey Registered: Apr 03, 2007 Total Posts: 185 Country: United States |
I really like your album design. This is very much like my style. If your brides like it, that's what matters. My only suggestions are on the first one, I don't like the tranparent blocks and the right page of number 3 seems a little busy. Otherwise, it looks terrific to me. |
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Vance Zachary Registered: Dec 16, 2007 Total Posts: 118 Country: United States |
I really like the layout. For competition these days, this style of layout scores vary well. As far as brides go, it won't be every brides cup of tea but those brides who like this style will seek you out just because of it |
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drew.bowser Registered: Jul 04, 2006 Total Posts: 483 Country: United States |
its too much. Remember that people are wanting albums to look at pictures...not cool design. I love your photoshopping, but i think that it has to be something that the bride requests because it does look like a brochure. Im not knocking you, I actually think it looks great! But just remember the main reason for even designing the album. |
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drew.bowser Registered: Jul 04, 2006 Total Posts: 483 Country: United States |
Oh and, I absolutely LOVE page number 2 |
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andrew81 Registered: Jun 16, 2004 Total Posts: 2348 Country: Australia |
Impressive! |