#275 Missing You
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Mark Meeks
Registered: Nov 30, 2007
Total Posts: 22
Country: United States

This is my first time posting in a weekly assignment. I know I won't be competitive, but you've got to start somewhere I suppose. Any critiques or suggestions will be appreciated.







Steve Spencer
Registered: Nov 08, 2006
Total Posts: 3886
Country: Canada

Hi Mark,

This is a very nice shot. Glad you decide to enter the WA. I think the selective color works here as it captures a dream or dream-like moment. Good luck this week,

Steve S.



Jazno
Registered: Oct 04, 2006
Total Posts: 2320
Country: Canada

Nice idea Mark, a very nice start.

On a technical note, I find the lighter area above her hair a little distracting. Maybe it would benefit from having a little cropped off the top?

Jason



markoner
Registered: Mar 17, 2005
Total Posts: 740
Country: France

I think it's a nice start too Mark !
I agree with Jason about the crop and I'm not sure about the selective color in this image. It's like telling an evidence for me here...

Good image nonetheless.

Julien



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