Rabbit Brush and Cottonwood
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Desert Rat
Registered: May 13, 2005
Total Posts: 3519
Country: United States

A late afternoon shot from the Eastern Sierra....
Tech
D2x
70-200
ISO 100
Brutal Comments or Critiques Welcome!


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Edited by Desert Rat on Sep 20, 2006 at 05:11 PM GMT


JimFox
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
Total Posts: 27232
Country: United States

Hey Eric,

Nice shot here. I really like the lighting and the cottonwood. It is kind of neat the cottonwoods behind it also, gives a lot of depth to this shot.

Jim



ajkessler
Registered: Dec 20, 2005
Total Posts: 3338
Country: United States

Great lighting on that tree. Since you asked for brutal, I'd offer some things to make the shot...well, a bit less boring. I think you could crop the bottom so that the image starts where the color in the brush begins. Also, I would 'velvia' it up a bit. Maybe not extreme, but I would darken the sky, as well as those hills so that the tree stands out a bit more. Its extremely dramatic as it is, so I don't think you need to do much to the actual tree, but i would make some heavy changes to the environment, and I think you'd have a real winner. Good luck.

AJ



Desert Rat
Registered: May 13, 2005
Total Posts: 3519
Country: United States

AJ Were you thinking of something like this?


How about this?


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Is this too much?


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Freemont
Registered: Feb 28, 2006
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Country: United States

the top one is good but i actually love the artistic effect on the bottom one, that looks really neat, not as a photo but as art.... heh who needs paint anymore you can just take a photo and convert it into art in photoshop.



Desert Rat
Registered: May 13, 2005
Total Posts: 3519
Country: United States

Freemont wrote:
the top one is good but i actually love the artistic effect on the bottom one, that looks really neat, not as a photo but as art.... heh who needs paint anymore you can just take a photo and convert it into art in photoshop.



Thanks



Rosemary R
Registered: Jan 08, 2004
Total Posts: 3166
Country: United States

Hey Eric,

That's beautiful. We were over there for a week through the Labor Day weekend....bet it's getting pretty as the leaves begin to turn.



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