#178: Street Signs (Grown Over)
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RandySmith
Registered: Jan 05, 2005
Total Posts: 153
Country: United States

These road signs appearance change with seasons.

All suggestions for improvement appreciated.

Randy

Edited by RandySmith on Oct 10, 2005 at 09:08 PM GMT (Reason: Recommendations to improve image)



Fishit
Registered: Aug 07, 2005
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Country: United States

I like the concept of what you captured, but the color seems flat. Well seen though.



RandySmith
Registered: Jan 05, 2005
Total Posts: 153
Country: United States

One of my biggest problems is to clearly "show" what I see in my mind when I see an object(s) to photograph. Any thoughts on making the colors "pop" ?

Thanks.
Randy



Fishit
Registered: Aug 07, 2005
Total Posts: 2158
Country: United States

I am not a expert but I have tried a little more contrast and then a touch of saturation to reduce hot spots, often I use PS curves to try and get it where I think it looks best.



suse
Registered: Dec 03, 2004
Total Posts: 1057
Country: United Kingdom


Yes, I agree with the above comments. It's a nice composition. Just needs a little contrast/saturation in the foliage. Maybe you could try multiple exposure layers in PS and then the eraser...



Fishit
Registered: Aug 07, 2005
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then the eraser? do you use the History function to do that process?



RandySmith
Registered: Jan 05, 2005
Total Posts: 153
Country: United States

Suse & Fishit,

I edited the photo and resubmitted. I used various contrast/sharpening controls in the RAW dialog.

Never sure if its too much.

Thanks.
Randy



Fishit
Registered: Aug 07, 2005
Total Posts: 2158
Country: United States

I looks a little to over saturated, but that could be my monitor, lets suse be the judege



suse
Registered: Dec 03, 2004
Total Posts: 1057
Country: United Kingdom

Hi

Nice work. The foliage looks better, though it might look a tad too saturated on my monitor?? That level of bright green would probably have worked in places, but as a block it might be a little too much maybe...?? Sometimes its a subjective thing...so don't quote me on that! I really do like the pic.

For Fishit, in reply to your query...I would have tried opening the image in Raw, then reopening it again with a different exposure, selecting it, copying it and then post it as a new layer over the original image. Then use the eraser on the second layer to 'paint' in some of the leaves. (ie revealing them from the first layer) You don't need to use the history button. That method usually takes a bit of playing around with, but it can work to get shadows and highlights into solid areas of colour.

You can do the same just with layers and levels/saturation etc.

I'm sure there will be others out there with more experience. I tend to use this method for saving my wrong exposures!



ironabike
Registered: May 28, 2005
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Country: United States

Wow--very nice work. I actually like the amount of saturation you have added. It makes the colors and photo really pop!!!
Jane



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