#508 The Flute Player
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Almass
Registered: Feb 11, 2011
Total Posts: 534
Country: United Kingdom

Angelica playing Paganini Caprice No.24



Tenn.Jer
Registered: Mar 08, 2011
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Beautiful musician; I hope the background folks were listening - or at least polite...

I like the inclusion of the OOF music stand, but the expanse of ceiling is a bit distracting; I hate to see anything pull attention away from the subject...
Good work.
Jerry



svassh
Registered: Mar 05, 2011
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Country: United States

Why are flute players always the prettiest girls? Great shot!



Oregon Gal
Registered: Nov 02, 2008
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Nice shot and looks great in B/W. Maybe crop some off the top.



relms
Registered: Jan 28, 2005
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Country: United States

Angelica's name is perfect for her. She looks terrific. That said, I would have preferred this shot taken from a different perspective without the distracting lights in the background. as suggested, a tighter crop would help. I do like that you used a classic black and white treatment.



Bob_Martin
Registered: Aug 03, 2009
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Country: United States

I like the lights in the background - they make interesting curves for the eye to follow after running down the straight edge of the flute.



Strad
Registered: Aug 20, 2004
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Great capture and I love it in B & W. I don't mind the lights in the background although it wouldn't be too hard to add a sort of slight vignette that would help focus the eyes on Angelica. To be fair, though, she is so pretty that it makes very little difference since all the males are going to see nothing but her, regardless.

Paganini 24th Caprice, eh? She must be quite a virtuoso.

All the best,

Endre



Almass
Registered: Feb 11, 2011
Total Posts: 534
Country: United Kingdom

Thank you all for your comments.