Overall the clothes are not helping this model...make her look wide when I know she isn\'t!!! She is a beautiful model and for her & your first time very nice attempt. Work together again and I think images will be much better
1) not crazy about the pose - don\'t like the left hand that close to the face for no real reason - some will say that the head should be turned slightly toward the camera so can see whole left eye -whites are blown on her right side
2) skin colour doesn\'t look the same on her face - looks soft
3) like this image if it was a h&s - love her look - her feet are not positioned well - have any of her with feet on bench - very nice lighting
4) pose is ok - whites blown slightly - hotspots in bg are distracting - not sure about stick coming out of her neck
Oct 28, 2008 at 10:35 AM
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