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Re: Mmm! Mmm! Nestle!


Very nice.
I have little experience shooting or critiqueing product shots and setups like this.
Couple of reactions, since my cents costs nothing.
Excellent concept, the spilled cocoa powder, beans and the warm tones, like good hot cocoa.
My eye goes first to the upper left center, OOF beans (or are they nuts?) and I then want more sharpness, more DOF there. Second, down to the mug but yanked back up by the bright white reflected light.
I\'d try to get those highlights down, preferably in camera.
If you want the mug to be the primary subject, surrounded by the softer ingredients_you might need more DOF or some selective softening of the less lit elements. With significant light above and the position upper left, my eye pulls too much away.
Hope this is useful and not too nit-picky.
Scott



Feb 18, 2012 at 07:32 PM
sbeme
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Re: Mmm! Mmm! Nestle!


Very nice.
I have little experience shooting or critiqueing product shots and setups like this.
Couple of reactions, since my cents costs nothing.
Excellent concept, the spilled cocoa powder, beans and the warm tones, like good hot cocoa.
My eye goes first to the upper left center, OOF beans (or are they nuts?) and I then want more sharpness, more DOF there. Second, down to the mug but yanked back up by the bright white reflected light.
I\'d try to get those highlights down, preferably in camera.
If you want the mug to be the primary subject, surrounded by the softer ingredients_you might need more DOF or some selective softening of the less lit elements. With significant light above and the position upper left, my eye pulls too much away.
Hope this is useful.
Scott



Feb 18, 2012 at 07:32 PM
sbeme
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Re: Mmm! Mmm! Nestle!


Very nice.
I have little experience shooting or critiqueing product shots and setups like this.
Couple of reactions, since my cents costs nothing.
I like the concept, the spilled cocoa powder, beans and the warm tones, like good hot cocoa.
My eye goes first to the upper left center, OOF beans (or are they nuts?) and I then want more sharpness, more DOF there. Second, down to the mug but yanked back up by the bright white reflected light.
I\'d try to get those highlights down, preferably in camera.
If you want the mug to be the primary subject, surrounded by the softer ingredients_you might need more DOF or some selective softening of the less lit elements. With significant light above and the position upper left, my eye pulls too much away.
Hope this is useful.
Scott



Feb 18, 2012 at 07:26 PM





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