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Varina
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p.1 #1 · Autumn in Ohio


I haven't been around in a LONG time! I've missed good old FM, and all of you! Boy, is it good to be back!

We spent a good part of the day shooting in Cuyahoga Valley National Park. The leaves are just about finished - but there is still so much to shoot! I used my 180 macro lens for most of the day. I'd love to hear what you all think!

Varina




Oct 23, 2010 at 06:27 PM
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p.1 #2 · Autumn in Ohio


I really like the 2nd and 3rd, Varina.

No fall color here - yet. It's nice to see some!



Oct 23, 2010 at 06:50 PM
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p.1 #3 · Autumn in Ohio


Fun macro set Varina - #2 and #3 are really neat. #1 would be but I have a very hard time believing it as a natural scene with an almost perfect bullseye on that lichen spot for the leaf. Still a fun image.

Alan



Oct 23, 2010 at 08:56 PM
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p.1 #4 · Autumn in Ohio


I love the simplicity on #2 and the colors in #3. Nicely done.


Oct 23, 2010 at 08:57 PM
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p.1 #5 · Autumn in Ohio


Good to see some shots from the CVNP--I live about 3 miles away. I spend a lot of time there, and it is a good place to use your macro lens. I was doing the same this morning.

Very nice set of images. I particularly like the third.

Dave



Oct 23, 2010 at 09:01 PM
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p.1 #6 · Autumn in Ohio


Welcome back Varina. You have some beautiful shots here. A particularly like #3 with the 3 layers of different colours. Well captured!
David



Oct 24, 2010 at 03:47 AM
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p.1 #7 · Autumn in Ohio


alichty wrote:
#1 would be but I have a very hard time believing it as a natural scene with an almost perfect bullseye on that lichen spot for the leaf.


Oh no, Alan - the scene isn't natural. I chose a tiny red leaf, and placed it on the spot of lichen. I certainly never intended to suggest that these scenes were perfectly natural and untouched. In fact, I arranged all of them for impact. For the second shot, I chose a textured leaf to contrast with the striped pattern of the bark behind. I chose three of the brightest leaves I could find for the third shot - and arranged them to show their contrasting colors and shapes. And for the last, I adjusted the flower so that it lay on the leaf just the way I wanted. I am not a photojournalist - so I'm not too concerned about accurate documentation. It's just "art" - I try not to take myself too seriously!

Thanks everyone! I am dreading winter's heavy skies - but loving every minute of Autumn.



Oct 24, 2010 at 08:42 AM
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p.1 #8 · Autumn in Ohio


In my opinion, image #1 and #2 looks too staged for my liking.

The third image has great potential. I really like the composition and the colours. I think that your DOF was a tad shallow because not all of the leaves are in focus.

Peace
Peter

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Oct 24, 2010 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #9 · Autumn in Ohio


It looks like the consensus is that if it looks staged it's not working for people.

So here's the question, then. Since all of these are staged, the actual staging isn't the issue... it's about creating a believable composition. Is that what at comes down to?

I'm curious to know what people think about this. I would have thought that there would be two groups - those who object to staging no matter what, and those who don't care one way or the other. It seems that there is a third (and possibly larger?) group - those who don't care if you stage an image as long as it looks like it could have been natural.

What do you think?




Oct 25, 2010 at 06:04 AM
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p.1 #10 · Autumn in Ohio


2nd and 3rd for me, too, Varina.
Nothing wrong with staging a scene, the trick is to get it to look like it's not staged. To my eyes the last 2 do look staged, but they are still quite natural feeling.
The 1st is just too good a bull's eye.

Barry



Oct 25, 2010 at 08:49 AM
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p.1 #11 · Autumn in Ohio


it was immediately evident to me that all of these are staged. they all look look fine and lovely art to me. even the act of staging itself requires some time and forethought so that itself is a skill.


Oct 25, 2010 at 08:53 AM
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p.1 #12 · Autumn in Ohio


bshamilton wrote:
2nd and 3rd for me, too, Varina.
Nothing wrong with staging a scene, the trick is to get it to look like it's not staged. To my eyes the last 2 do look staged, but they are still quite natural feeling.
The 1st is just too good a bull's eye.

Barry


I was going to call that first shot "In the Spotlight", Barry. I was actually going for the "staged" look, there... quite literally! Ha! Ah well - you can't please everyone.

I wonder if the same image would get a similar response from non-photographers? Do you think it would bother them if the photographer obviously placed the subject?



Oct 25, 2010 at 09:11 AM
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p.1 #13 · Autumn in Ohio


Binh Ly wrote:
it was immediately evident to me that all of these are staged. they all look look fine and lovely art to me. even the act of staging itself requires some time and forethought so that itself is a skill.



Thanks!



Oct 25, 2010 at 09:12 AM
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p.1 #14 · Autumn in Ohio


Varina,

The whole set is very nice, but #3 is quite exceptional.



Oct 25, 2010 at 08:36 PM
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p.1 #15 · Autumn in Ohio


It's too bad this set got hijacked by a "to stage or not or how to stage" debate.

1 and 2 don't have enough negative space. I would really like to see more of an interaction with the leaf and lichen patch.

3 I would like to see the red leaf underneath the yellow. It's hard for me to break off the heap of red in the middle.

4 Move the stem from the middle of the image. It's a nice contrast of color and texture. Let the line of the stalk lead someplace.

Wes



Oct 25, 2010 at 09:50 PM
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p.1 #16 · Autumn in Ohio


If "staging" is so wrong, then still life photography would be a lost art
It's all about shooting your vision. #3 is really nice. An excellent play on color.

Very nice.

Brian



Oct 25, 2010 at 10:24 PM
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p.1 #17 · Autumn in Ohio


Bravo. Wonderful placement in all Varina. The last two rock!


Oct 26, 2010 at 12:52 AM
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p.1 #18 · Autumn in Ohio


Nice work with the three leaves and flower on leaf, way to go, hope to continue to explore this style and post a few more....


Oct 26, 2010 at 01:05 AM
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p.1 #19 · Autumn in Ohio


#3 & #4 for me from a color/comp perspective - very good quality on all


Oct 26, 2010 at 01:11 AM
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p.1 #20 · Autumn in Ohio


3 and 4 for me as well. super :0


Oct 26, 2010 at 04:42 AM
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