my other feedback as promised. #3 is an interesting spot and pose but she looks underexposed. 10 is a neat spot. 12 is a lovely shot, good location, lighting and pose. 13 and 18 are practically cliche images nowadays. I see what you're going for in 20 but it doesn't work. For 22, generally it's a bad idea to ask ladies in heels to walk on lawns. The two on the ends are sinking in. For 23, the guys don't seem to be the serious types, probably not the best pose for the group.
