Generally I liked them But I would agree with the comments about geling your flash. I also think you've pulled too much out of the background in 6, leaving a very grainy feel. If you're doing that again, consider bracketing and putting the shot together from two different exposures later?
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys! I totally agree about gelling the flash. I only carried a full CTO on me, walked away with my whole stuff about 5-10 min from the car... when I tried the CTO it was way too orangy for me so I stopped using it, and I didn't wanna go back to the car get the half one - that'll teach me from bringing the wrong gel =(