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KyleR.
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p.1 #1 · In the City

Hey guys, This is my first attempt at street photography, so please Critique my shots!
These were all taken on a sigma 70mm macro lens in NYC. I'm not sure on the pp for these, so feel free to do what you want to them.

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Mar 15, 2010 at 02:50 AM

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p.1 #2 · In the City

KyleR. wrote:
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I like this one quite a bit. Surprising to me because I usually greatly prefer more natural treatments.

Mar 15, 2010 at 06:12 PM

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p.1 #3 · In the City

Thanks Mister Bean!

Mar 15, 2010 at 06:51 PM

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p.1 #4 · In the City

Hey guys,
I accidently deleted the last one so I redid it I think a little better.
tell me what you think. If the old one is better, all i have to do is just lower the saturation

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Mar 15, 2010 at 06:59 PM

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p.1 #5 · In the City

I'd like the first three better if they were sharper. The problem may be hand holding technique. Try shooting some similar images with a shutter speed of perhaps 1/500th. If they remain soft it is likely to be a focus issue of some sort.

Mar 15, 2010 at 08:53 PM

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p.1 #6 · In the City

Thanks auntipode. I'm pretty sure it was the shutter speed. When I go so high with the shutter speed I have to use a reicoulius iso. I guess a faster lens would solve the problem. Any thoughts on 4. And five?

Mar 15, 2010 at 08:59 PM

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p.1 #7 · In the City

There's a sharpness issue with the fence post and the cropping of four seems weak to me. Five doesn't quite work for me. Not sure why. Here's an alternate treatment for four:

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Mar 15, 2010 at 09:47 PM

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p.1 #8 · In the City

Thanks auntipode, I like the new crop on number 4

Mar 15, 2010 at 11:12 PM

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p.1 #9 · In the City

Thanks auntipode, I like the new crop on number 4

Mar 15, 2010 at 11:14 PM


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