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KyleR.
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p.1 #1 · In the City

Hey guys, This is my first attempt at street photography, so please Critique my shots!
These were all taken on a sigma 70mm macro lens in NYC. I'm not sure on the pp for these, so feel free to do what you want to them.

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Thanks,
Kyle

Mar 14, 2010 at 09:50 PM

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p.1 #2 · In the City

KyleR. wrote:
6. http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4045/4434322112_7f885928e2_o.jpg

I like this one quite a bit. Surprising to me because I usually greatly prefer more natural treatments.

Mar 15, 2010 at 01:12 PM

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p.1 #3 · In the City

Thanks Mister Bean!

Mar 15, 2010 at 01:51 PM

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p.1 #4 · In the City

Hey guys,
I accidently deleted the last one so I redid it I think a little better.
tell me what you think. If the old one is better, all i have to do is just lower the saturation

Mar 15, 2010 at 01:59 PM

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p.1 #5 · In the City

I'd like the first three better if they were sharper. The problem may be hand holding technique. Try shooting some similar images with a shutter speed of perhaps 1/500th. If they remain soft it is likely to be a focus issue of some sort.

Mar 15, 2010 at 03:53 PM

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p.1 #6 · In the City

Thanks auntipode. I'm pretty sure it was the shutter speed. When I go so high with the shutter speed I have to use a reicoulius iso. I guess a faster lens would solve the problem. Any thoughts on 4. And five?

Mar 15, 2010 at 03:59 PM

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p.1 #7 · In the City

Thanks auntipode, I like the new crop on number 4

Mar 15, 2010 at 06:12 PM

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p.1 #8 · In the City

Thanks auntipode, I like the new crop on number 4

Mar 15, 2010 at 06:14 PM


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