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p.1 #1 · Your opinions

Please critique, comments and suggestions.....

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Feb 17, 2010 at 05:17 PM

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p.1 #2 · Your opinions

I quite like the color and compo of the first, although it's a little soft, most noticeable on the edges of the bowl. I'm not familiar with the Kodak camera you used, does it allow manual control? If so, you needed a smaller aperture and/or a slightly better choice of focus and/or perhaps the camera support wasn't quite solid enough for the slow shutter speed.

It's difficult to properly evaluate the second and third because they are rendered so small.

Feb 17, 2010 at 10:25 PM

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p.1 #3 · Your opinions

The Kodak was a fixed lens, so not able to make adjustments, I just moved back and forth to obtain focus. I have reattached the second two, hopefully larger this time. Bear with me, I am new at this. And thanks for your interest. I just want to learn.

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Feb 17, 2010 at 11:20 PM

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Within the limits of your camera I like them. Here's a couple of suggestions for cropping and some PP sharpening:

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Feb 18, 2010 at 03:46 AM

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p.1 #5 · Your opinions

How did you do the sharpening? I have access to PS4 and Lightroom.

Feb 18, 2010 at 10:49 AM


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