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kory
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p.1 #1 · portrait in the park


Hello all, this is my first upload to the B&W forums, C+C appreciated, thanks!




Feb 09, 2010 at 01:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · portrait in the park


Nice high contrast portrait. My nit would be the bar in the foreground. - Paul


Feb 09, 2010 at 04:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · portrait in the park


I like the use of the bars as compositional element. The bar in foreground does not bother me at all. In fact I like how it pushes the subject back in the photo more. Nice.


Feb 09, 2010 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · portrait in the park


Kory,
Welcome to this friendly little forum.
As a first post- this is a knockout shot!
As a photograph- this is a knockout shot!
Charlie
(PS- I like it .)



Feb 09, 2010 at 05:22 PM
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p.1 #5 · portrait in the park



I like your perspective in this shot, and his easy, nice smile is tops!

Question: Any exposure tips? He's got a very blonde head of hair which I've found can throw things off. I shoot some white-haired people, and man, they often get way blown out.

-Tim



Feb 09, 2010 at 08:41 PM
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p.1 #6 · portrait in the park


Welcome. The bars are a good compositional element to this shot. I like it a lot.

Cheers Ray



Feb 10, 2010 at 02:01 AM
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p.1 #7 · portrait in the park


Sweet portrait. Would crop a little from the right to avoid the vertical bar (same nit as Paul's).

santiago



Feb 10, 2010 at 05:24 AM
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p.1 #8 · portrait in the park


Kory - This is a great shot; I love the expression and the bars (could try cropping in in on the right, like the others said, but I like it as it is). Very impressive.


Feb 10, 2010 at 07:41 AM
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p.1 #9 · portrait in the park


Thanks everyone, I do agree a crop getting rid if the vertical bars would help! I appreciate the welcome and look forward to seeing more of your work as well!


Feb 10, 2010 at 10:01 AM
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p.1 #10 · portrait in the park


Great catch Kory. The bars don't bother me at all and I like it the way it is. Really nice contrast control.

Allan



Feb 10, 2010 at 04:29 PM
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p.1 #11 · portrait in the park



Beautiful capture. Great expression. Like the strong contrast.
I'm fine with the bar in front, although instinctively I first wonder about it not being there. Agree with a tad of a crop from the right.

Welcome to the forum!

Scott



Feb 10, 2010 at 07:56 PM





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