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p.1 #1 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Hey everyone,
this is my first post so I thought it would be fitting to show my first real planned portrait I took today. It is right by a window with a speedlight bounced from on the camera to camera left, and a window behind her along with a reflector below her, camera right. Would love to hear any feedback you guys have. Thanks
Portrait

BTW- is there any way to get that photo into the post instead of just the link?



Feb 07, 2010 at 04:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Hi,

Welcome to posting here.

Nice expression in the photo.

My Impression: Friendly person who likes the photographer.

Are you using a calibrated monitor?



Feb 07, 2010 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #3 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Hi, thanks for the comments. Right now I'm using a sort've calibrated monitor you could say. It's a macbook that I've calibrated with the built-in software and online contrast, brightness, etc. tests, but I tried a spyder express and it just turned the screen a very cool color after a few tries so I just gave up on it.
Does the color look off to you?



Feb 07, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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p.1 #4 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


I dont know but I think Macbook's screen make low quality pictures look worst and noisy!


Feb 08, 2010 at 12:18 AM
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p.1 #5 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Welcome.


Feb 08, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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p.1 #6 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Fo sho. I'll help you out. Just right click the photo and copy and paste the image address in your post. Tada!

http://a2.vox.com/6a011017aa5258860e0123ddf88712860c-pi

Looks good to me. Calibration looks fine, a bit on the warm side, but nice warm, not overly warm. Haha. Good use of depth of field and window light.



Feb 08, 2010 at 12:40 AM
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p.1 #7 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Bah. Apparently your images won't post. Weird.


Feb 08, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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p.1 #8 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Wait. Idea:

http://a2.vox.com/6a011017aa5258860e0123ddf88712860



Feb 08, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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p.1 #9 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Nope.


Feb 08, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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p.1 #10 · 1st Portrait- Feedback Please


Thanks for the welcome everyone.

Tukhang, I agree this isn't the best screen but it's all I have right now as I'm still a student.

Thanks Danny.

Mike, thanks for trying with getting the image in . And thanks for the comment about the picture, I was going for the warmer feel as you said. I tend to always lean towards a warmer color balance with people shots. I'm glad to hear I didn't start off too bad.

Anotherview, I don't yet have that privilege, but thanks for the info I'll have to check out subscribing. I agree about calibration, I'm thinking about getting a new version and maybe the pro model and seeing if that works. For the portrait, I sort of liked the lighter background in this as it made the lines made from the sides of the window less noticeable. I get what you're saying though, and will think more about subject-background contrast next time around.

Thanks again everyone.



Feb 08, 2010 at 05:09 PM





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