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p.1 #1 · Mila the model

DId a fashion shoot today. Nothing complicated- just a rooftop and some cobblestone streets. Here's the best 2 in my opinion.

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Dec 29, 2009 at 02:03 AM

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p.1 #2 · Mila the model

Nice shots, she is beautiful from what I can see. The only thing I don't like are the backgrounds here. I find the street lights in the second shot to be distracting and the writing on the wall in the first.
The posing is very nice though nice job.

Dec 29, 2009 at 02:17 AM

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p.1 #3 · Mila the model

second one her face doesn't appear to be very sharp...

Dec 29, 2009 at 02:18 AM

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p.1 #4 · Mila the model

scottiet wrote:
Nice shots, she is beautiful from what I can see. The only thing I don't like are the backgrounds here. I find the street lights in the second shot to be distracting and the writing on the wall in the first.
The posing is very nice though nice job.

+1. Love her body language.

Maybe in #2 you could clone out that blue thing?

Dec 29, 2009 at 02:29 AM

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p.1 #5 · Mila the model

I actually like the first one better. The background doesn't bother me at all. I would, however, crop the right side of the photo into the edge of the building with the graffiti, eliminating the building across the way.

Om the second one, the street lights are very distracting. Also, that blue thing on the street directly across from her backside is very distracting. I would just clone them out. I love the cobblestone street, but wish it weren't broken up by the sewer cover or whatever that is to the right.

Dec 29, 2009 at 02:29 AM

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p.1 #6 · Mila the model

I'll clone out the blue. I actually rather liked the streetlights... I guess opinions differ.

The cobblestone was tough. We were in Soho around sundown and there were a lot of people out and about and a lot of cars in the street. Finding a clear area to shoot was very difficult.

Dtomasula good call about the crop. Here is the crop.

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Dec 29, 2009 at 02:32 AM

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p.1 #7 · Mila the model

I like the first one better, but both are nice.

I'm a huge boot lover so these boots really rock in my opinion.

Dec 29, 2009 at 02:57 AM

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p.1 #8 · Mila the model

I like both, but the problem with the new crop is there is now very little "head room" in the photo. Maybe instead of cropping you can clone in more of the graffiti wall so there is more breathing room. It would also allow the full pedastal-like object in the frame. Just my 2¢.

Mark

Dec 29, 2009 at 03:59 AM

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p.1 #9 · Mila the model

I like the first shot. Some good texture in there as well.

Dec 29, 2009 at 04:19 AM

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p.1 #10 · Mila the model

Agree with you about the lights. Like both shots

Dec 29, 2009 at 05:18 PM


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