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Craig Yannuzzi
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p.1 #1 · Allison

Had the pleasure of shooting Allison this week as part of a model call for a local salon. Just thought I'd share a few. For the last shot we tried to purposely work in her tattoos.

C&C welcomed.

Nov 18, 2009 at 04:27 PM

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p.1 #2 · Allison

Their is an overall issue with her lashes - you probably noticed her left eye lashes are way more 'up' then her left - it looks bizarre and a good MUA would be able to fix that.

1 is nice, though the lighting needs to be a bit more dynamic to not look like she's an 80's punk rocker.

2 great, but the above overall issue kills the shot.

3 - reddish sepia looks bleh, would keep it 3 straight b/w.s

Nov 18, 2009 at 05:05 PM

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p.1 #3 · Allison

i don't mind the tone in #3, but i'd get that weird shadow in her armpit out of there.

not too flattering if you ask me

Nov 18, 2009 at 05:29 PM

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p.1 #4 · Allison

2 is very nice
3 is fine - I just personally do not like the underarm shots ( but that is just a me thing )
if you like it - then it image is fine.

best

steve

Nov 18, 2009 at 06:13 PM

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p.1 #5 · Allison

Very pretty lady! I like the 1st shot the most... you could deepen the tones a little more like the second shot. But... still a nice capture.

Hatch

Nov 18, 2009 at 09:36 PM

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p.1 #6 · Allison

Good photos and pretty model..

But the underarm thing in photo 3 feels very odd and not sexy imo.

Nov 18, 2009 at 09:39 PM

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p.1 #7 · Allison

I like 1 the best, but it's like lacking oomph. Like it seems almost hazy. Also, clone the hair/skin on the shirt.

Nov 18, 2009 at 10:16 PM

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p.1 #8 · Allison

I agree with the left eye critique above. It's a bit unsettling.

Nov 18, 2009 at 10:20 PM

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p.1 #9 · Allison

Too much hands on the head in this series.

Nov 19, 2009 at 01:26 AM

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p.1 #10 · Allison

The hands-on-the-head idea turned out really bad. In #1, it makes her head look twisted and contorted out of shape. In #2, the open fingers on the left side along with the lock of hair, makes that eye look larger than the other. And #3 you've already been told about.

Pretty girl. Bad poses.

Nov 19, 2009 at 01:37 AM


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