Had the pleasure of shooting Allison this week as part of a model call for a local salon. Just thought I'd share a few. For the last shot we tried to purposely work in her tattoos.
Their is an overall issue with her lashes - you probably noticed her left eye lashes are way more 'up' then her left - it looks bizarre and a good MUA would be able to fix that.
1 is nice, though the lighting needs to be a bit more dynamic to not look like she's an 80's punk rocker.
2 great, but the above overall issue kills the shot.
3 - reddish sepia looks bleh, would keep it 3 straight b/w.s
The hands-on-the-head idea turned out really bad. In #1, it makes her head look twisted and contorted out of shape. In #2, the open fingers on the left side along with the lock of hair, makes that eye look larger than the other. And #3 you've already been told about.
