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p.1 #1 · Sunwapta Falls +1


In my excitement, I hardly noticed the guard rails were in the shot, sorta distracting....
The river looks tilted, but the trees seem straight, your feedback would be helpful...

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Nov 18, 2009 at 01:41 AM
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p.1 #2 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Very nice Zeph, beautiful water, perfect shutter speed
cheers Andrew



Nov 18, 2009 at 01:53 AM
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p.1 #3 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Wow, what a spectacular scene, and very well captured.

My only nits are things that you didn't have control over, such as the fence (middle left) and I don't really like the larger branch interfering with the top of the falls but that could be easily cloned out. I see a few dust bunnies too Get to cloning! Haha...

Aside from those tiny nits this is a great shot! I really like it.

Tim

Ps... I see what you're saying about the tilted river but I think it's just one those mind tricks... It's barely noticeable and I only "saw" it after reading what you wrote. It didn't catch my eye right off the bat.



Nov 18, 2009 at 03:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Beautiful scene and great perspective. The rail really doesn't bother me. I like it.

Rich



Nov 18, 2009 at 09:11 AM
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p.1 #5 · Sunwapta Falls +1


I think a high perspective will often skew a river into looking tilted. This looks fine to me. The fallen trees tell of strong storms or heavy winter damage. The color and motion in the river are wonderful, and it looks like a LOT of water!!
My only suggestion....very slight 's' to deepen the shadows a small touch.
Beautiful view!

Barry



Nov 18, 2009 at 09:15 AM
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p.1 #6 · Sunwapta Falls +1


That is an excellent image Zeph - the exposure on the water is dead on and the overall lighting is very nice. Tim is right about the dust bunnies but that's a quick fix. I might be inclined to try to reduce the visual of the guard rail if this were my image but YMMV.

Nice work.

Alan



Nov 18, 2009 at 09:16 AM
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p.1 #7 · Sunwapta Falls +1


very nice zeph, what i really like is that your vertical framing suits this scene very well!

i forgot to mention, there might be some dust spots in the upper right. and about the fence, doesn't bother me that much.

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Nov 18, 2009 at 09:17 AM
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p.1 #8 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Spectacular view, Zeph. I can imagine that you hardly noticed the guard. I also would have been excited.
Karl



Nov 18, 2009 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #9 · Sunwapta Falls +1


That's beautiful Zeph, if any fallen trees happen to be in a scene like this, at least they're at oblique angles! I agree with Alan about reducing the visibility of the guardrails - even just a slight burning of the highlights on it should reduce their standoutishness...

David



Nov 18, 2009 at 01:20 PM
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p.1 #10 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Very impressive (why not just clone that rail out)


Nov 18, 2009 at 02:07 PM
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p.1 #11 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Great shot of one of my favourite places, very nice job.
(why not just clone that rail out)

Rob



Nov 18, 2009 at 02:29 PM
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p.1 #12 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Wow, that is quite a setting, Zeph. I really like the way this is presented. Really nice work on this. I would be tempted, as well, to clone those rails out.

Cheers,
Ed



Nov 18, 2009 at 03:03 PM
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p.1 #13 · Sunwapta Falls +1


lovely shot of great scenery! you could clone out the fence

Grtz

Hillebrand



Nov 18, 2009 at 03:09 PM
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p.1 #14 · Sunwapta Falls +1


Great shot Zeph. That's a big flow there
David



Nov 18, 2009 at 04:15 PM
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p.1 #15 · Sunwapta Falls +1


First off, you folks are too kind... I appreciate all of the kind words and comments. Not sure how I missed the dust spots, seems like that's what I spend most of my processing time doing, especially with panos, give me a break! I'm tempted to get a camera back for every lens I own! Something has to be done about dust, I know I can map the spots, but my focal length is all over the place.
Anyway, I posted a cloned version, without the fences, certainly not something I could print, but looks better for web purposes...



Nov 18, 2009 at 09:35 PM





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