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Archive 2009 · What Next...

  
 
the supernige
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This is a shot from a recent 10k in Socal...

Feedback welcome

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2498/4113138782_7d25742283_b.jpg



Nov 17, 2009 at 02:54 PM
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ok so like it, hate it, it's awful or what. I'm guessing the B+W is all wrong. Right?


Nov 18, 2009 at 03:54 PM
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I don't hate it... Maybe the tones are a little off, I mostly notice it in his face, for my preference it's a little too gray and missing some detail. The blacks and whites look good to me, so maybe just a bump up in the mids? I also am distracted by the out of focus highlights on the right, maybe consider a crop to eliminate them and un-center the boy in the frame. I know, that would break the rule about not having your subject looking 'out of the frame', but the far right serves no purpose in telling any of the story here, and I actually like the slightly oof tree trunk behind him.

David



Nov 18, 2009 at 07:18 PM
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Thanks very much, this is all very helpful. I appreciate that. Certainly things that I had not considered.


Nov 19, 2009 at 11:21 AM





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