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p.1 #1 · S + K - Engagement


Hey all,

Here is an engagement from earlier this week. C&C are welcome!

full coverage at: www.amernabulsi.com/sam&kassandra

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Nov 16, 2009 at 11:49 PM
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p.1 #2 · S + K - Engagement


You have a very nice set here but honestly the green/gray tone really detracts from the photos. I would dial that out and punch up the colors, just one man's opinion.

Dave

Nov 16, 2009 at 11:52 PM
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p.1 #3 · S + K - Engagement


^ I agree with you, i think i am having trouble editing my photos in bright light.

here is the photo out of the camera untouched.

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Nov 16, 2009 at 11:59 PM
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p.1 #4 · S + K - Engagement


6 raises eyebrows. Don't know if it was intentional.

Nov 17, 2009 at 12:33 AM
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I like these, very creative angles and PP. 8 with pp looks better imho.

Nov 17, 2009 at 12:46 AM
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p.1 #6 · S + K - Engagement


Really love your work on this - it's very clean, there are wonderful moments. Great job! We don't get light like that very often down here. It's always bright and sunny - good for other kinds of shots, but sometimes i want a different kind of day.

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:19 PM
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p.1 #7 · S + K - Engagement


Kassandra is Kute. Love #4. 8 is nice too.

He should have lost the shoes as she did, no?

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:24 PM
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Overall set is great! I wouldn't do a thing about the processing... to me the cyanish/greenish tone works well with the red in the sweater. I'd maybe test-drive it with the clients of course, 'cause they might prefer something more standard but as presented I thought the processing was cool.

My favorites are:

4 (by a bit)
7

I dig the posing in 8 very much but I'm totally with Tony on this... he should have lost the shoes.

In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )

in 2. she looks deliciously tantalizing and I totally dig the hair-in-front-of-her-eyes but he's doing some sort of squinty-eye thing that is either a stoner "u got a joint?" thing or I dunno... anyway... I hope you got another frame of that with a more natural eye situation going on.

Overall again, I'd be superhappy if this were my set, or if I were the client

nOt Lisy

P.S. One word of warning: on 7 her overhand grip with fingers flexed gives a bit of an amputated fingers look. It's not bad enough to be a problem, but I'd suggest finding a way to have a hand-holding-hand connection without the amputee look (it's happened to me and I don't have a solution yet... but I thoguht I'd still bring it up)

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:43 PM
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4 is a nice shot, but I am not a fan of the pp...

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lisy78 wrote:
In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )


I do this myself (pretty much only when standing though). My wife calls it something that I can't remember (some medical term, she's a PT).


Nov 17, 2009 at 03:48 PM
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Tony Schreiber wrote:
lisy78 wrote:
In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )


I do this myself (pretty much only when standing though). My wife calls it something that I can't remember (some medical term, she's a PT).


werd

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:58 PM
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p.1 #12 · S + K - Engagement


the full coverage album had alot of awesome photos! i'd suggest to check those ones out instead. good job Rema. (check your pm)

Nov 17, 2009 at 04:01 PM
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DB wrote:
Really love your work on this - it's very clean, there are wonderful moments. Great job! We don't get light like that very often down here. It's always bright and sunny - good for other kinds of shots, but sometimes i want a different kind of day.


Thanks!

hate super bright days!

Nov 17, 2009 at 04:07 PM
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Tony Schreiber wrote:
Kassandra is Kute. Love #4. 8 is nice too.

He should have lost the shoes as she did, no?


i was so close to asking him to take them off lol i duno why i didnt

Nov 17, 2009 at 04:08 PM
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Mr. Malik wrote:
4 is a nice shot, but I am not a fan of the pp...


thanks, yeah i am still iffy too

Nov 17, 2009 at 04:08 PM
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p.1 #16 · S + K - Engagement


lisy78 wrote:
Overall set is great! I wouldn't do a thing about the processing... to me the cyanish/greenish tone works well with the red in the sweater. I'd maybe test-drive it with the clients of course, 'cause they might prefer something more standard but as presented I thought the processing was cool.

My favorites are:

4 (by a bit)
7

I dig the posing in 8 very much but I'm totally with Tony on this... he should have lost the shoes.

In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )

in 2. she looks deliciously tantalizing and I totally dig the hair-in-front-of-her-eyes but he's doing some sort of squinty-eye thing that is either a stoner "u got a joint?" thing or I dunno... anyway... I hope you got another frame of that with a more natural eye situation going on.

Overall again, I'd be superhappy if this were my set, or if I were the client

nOt Lisy

P.S. One word of warning: on 7 her overhand grip with fingers flexed gives a bit of an amputated fingers look. It's not bad enough to be a problem, but I'd suggest finding a way to have a hand-holding-hand connection without the amputee look (it's happened to me and I don't have a solution yet... but I thoguht I'd still bring it up)



Thanks you for the proper C&C, you have alot of good points! I agree with everything you said and appriciate it


Nov 17, 2009 at 04:09 PM
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p.1 #17 · S + K - Engagement


matrix hump. interesting.



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