You have a very nice set here but honestly the green/gray tone really detracts from the photos. I would dial that out and punch up the colors, just one man's opinion.
Really love your work on this - it's very clean, there are wonderful moments. Great job! We don't get light like that very often down here. It's always bright and sunny - good for other kinds of shots, but sometimes i want a different kind of day.
Overall set is great! I wouldn't do a thing about the processing... to me the cyanish/greenish tone works well with the red in the sweater. I'd maybe test-drive it with the clients of course, 'cause they might prefer something more standard but as presented I thought the processing was cool.
My favorites are:
4 (by a bit)
7
I dig the posing in 8 very much but I'm totally with Tony on this... he should have lost the shoes.
In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )
in 2. she looks deliciously tantalizing and I totally dig the hair-in-front-of-her-eyes but he's doing some sort of squinty-eye thing that is either a stoner "u got a joint?" thing or I dunno... anyway... I hope you got another frame of that with a more natural eye situation going on.
Overall again, I'd be superhappy if this were my set, or if I were the client
nOt Lisy
P.S. One word of warning: on 7 her overhand grip with fingers flexed gives a bit of an amputated fingers look. It's not bad enough to be a problem, but I'd suggest finding a way to have a hand-holding-hand connection without the amputee look (it's happened to me and I don't have a solution yet... but I thoguht I'd still bring it up)
lisy78 wrote:
In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )
I do this myself (pretty much only when standing though). My wife calls it something that I can't remember (some medical term, she's a PT).
Tony Schreiber wrote:
I do this myself (pretty much only when standing though). My wife calls it something that I can't remember (some medical term, she's a PT).
DB wrote:
Really love your work on this - it's very clean, there are wonderful moments. Great job! We don't get light like that very often down here. It's always bright and sunny - good for other kinds of shots, but sometimes i want a different kind of day.
lisy78 wrote:
Overall set is great! I wouldn't do a thing about the processing... to me the cyanish/greenish tone works well with the red in the sweater. I'd maybe test-drive it with the clients of course, 'cause they might prefer something more standard but as presented I thought the processing was cool.
My favorites are:
4 (by a bit)
7
I dig the posing in 8 very much but I'm totally with Tony on this... he should have lost the shoes.
In 1. the dude is doing something weird with his foot that I had a problem a couple of evenings ago while doing a mommy and son session... WTF is up with this side of the foot curvy foreleg carp? ... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? )
in 2. she looks deliciously tantalizing and I totally dig the hair-in-front-of-her-eyes but he's doing some sort of squinty-eye thing that is either a stoner "u got a joint?" thing or I dunno... anyway... I hope you got another frame of that with a more natural eye situation going on.
Overall again, I'd be superhappy if this were my set, or if I were the client
nOt Lisy
P.S. One word of warning: on 7 her overhand grip with fingers flexed gives a bit of an amputated fingers look. It's not bad enough to be a problem, but I'd suggest finding a way to have a hand-holding-hand connection without the amputee look (it's happened to me and I don't have a solution yet... but I thoguht I'd still bring it up)...Show more →
Thanks you for the proper C&C, you have alot of good points! I agree with everything you said and appriciate it
... glad I caught it (I was staring at her legs? 
good job Rema. (check your pm)