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Archive 2009 · The Road to Menzi

  
 
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p.1 #1 · The Road to Menzi


Menzi is a hill located on the Del Monte Plantation in Cagayan de Oro, Philippines. I shot this low to the ground with my D80, using a Tokina 16-50mm f/2.8 DX lens, that I later discovered has a “loose” inner barrel.

Anyway, I’m using Adobe Lightroom for post processing and wondering if there is anything else I can do to give it the “finished” look.



Nov 08, 2009 at 10:56 AM
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p.1 #2 · The Road to Menzi


Nice. Wait, wait, I am rolling down the hill.


Nov 08, 2009 at 11:57 AM
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p.1 #3 · The Road to Menzi


Thanks Kaden.


Nov 08, 2009 at 02:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · The Road to Menzi


Greg,
There are so many options in post-processing. Can you describe the "finished look" you are trying to achieve? Or post an example?

Scott



Nov 08, 2009 at 08:11 PM
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p.1 #5 · The Road to Menzi


Just looking for advice. I’m new to using Lightroom, or any other photo processing software for that matter, so I’m just looking for tips on what to “look” for in my photographs.


Nov 13, 2009 at 12:43 PM
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p.1 #6 · The Road to Menzi


Like the fact that #2 above is straightened. I still like #1 better, as it was just a spontaneous shot vs. set up for proper framing and composition....


Nov 13, 2009 at 12:45 PM
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p.1 #7 · The Road to Menzi


I like it. Thanks for taking the time to work on it so I can see the difference. Sorry for the delay in getting back, but I’ve been working insane hours the past month. It really helps me see what I’m not seeing!


Dec 01, 2009 at 03:13 PM
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p.1 #8 · The Road to Menzi


Greg,
Glad it worked.
I was wondering what happened. Hope the work schedule returns to sanity.

Scott



Dec 01, 2009 at 07:16 PM
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p.1 #9 · The Road to Menzi


Thanks Scott. We’re done with what we call a “turn-around” so life should be more normal, at least until the next one! Now I have time to get out and work on my skills with the camera!


Dec 02, 2009 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #10 · The Road to Menzi


Stick you your unstraightened crop!!!!! It is MUCH more dynamic.


a SLIGHT bump to the clarity/vibrance sliders should do the trick. Lighten shadows a touch too to bring out a bit more background detail. Dont overdo it, you have a very good image. Youll notice that the differences I made are small. Some carful selective sharpening would help but only if you have a high res image. I didnt attempt due to the web size image... It just artifacts too much. Also, I closned out the small peice of trash/plastic/somthing in the foreground. you might also clone out that white streak on the left side of the frame on the road, it is distracting.

Here is my stab at it.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2803/4156432992_a312cb6a5f_o.jpg



Dec 03, 2009 at 03:24 PM
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p.1 #11 · The Road to Menzi


Thank you Nick. I like the original as well, but it does need some adjustments in vibrance and saturation. I’ll try the cloning you suggested...

Greg



Dec 04, 2009 at 04:10 PM
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p.1 #12 · The Road to Menzi


Looks great... though I would also clone in the white streak on the road, left center frame.

Otherwise it looks great. NJ.



Dec 04, 2009 at 05:42 PM





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