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Archive 2009 · Portrait overload! CC

  
 
Mr.walczak1
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p.1 #1 · Portrait overload! CC


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Self CC - 3 Too soft (went to crazy on noise reduction) and wierd shadow through the eye from my window, 5 Bit of lense flair, 8 slightly blown out...... Some pictures have a fair bit of noise I forgot to change it back from 400 to 200 .. D70 sucks even at 400 iso ... All shot with a Nikkor 1.8d

CC please



Nov 06, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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p.1 #2 · Portrait overload! CC


Hi,
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you. All smilies I post are genuine and sincere.

Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
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She is pretty. She has pretty eyes. She looks like she likes you.

I like the expression of image#1 the most, but think the PP has accentuated the dark areas around her eyes.

I hope these comments help you.



Nov 07, 2009 at 05:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · Portrait overload! CC


You think?? How can you tell?? :P any other ways to improve on the others?


Nov 07, 2009 at 07:44 AM
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p.1 #4 · Portrait overload! CC


she looks tired or with sinus difficulites in most of the shots.
Not one smile in the series



Nov 07, 2009 at 08:26 AM





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