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p.1 #7 · Howdy - flash with a hat exercise | |
I appreciate the words, Steve, but keep in mind that a lot of what I've learned was right here on this forum, from Chuck Gardner mainly (lots of good stuff on his site) and from others that post here. The rest is just being a keen observer.
You colour shot is nice. You've produced a border around the face - hat on top, shouders down below and the vertical line on the side. It works to accentuate the subject.
Keeping the umbrella at eye level like that has solved the "shadow under the hat" problem. The danger, I suppose is getting the "up the nose" lighting, which you didn't do (at least to my eye).
I like the amount of hat you show in #1. It keeps the eyes high in the frame (not centered). Showing all of the hat might shift the attention there.
Good job in the 2nd shot too. Not as much smile, but you're mixing it up, right?
Really nice job, Steve. Keep those shots coming - more SP's or co-workers, whatever.
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