My Favorites are the first two and the SWING and the RUN shots.
My Simple Suggestion: See the Newbies or New to FM thread up on the forum now. Read it and send me a PM. I will send you a link to some tips on posting here that may help you get more comments and have a better time here.
I like your sequence of photos. Nice happy times captured. Good photography. Sharp focus on the eyes, and clean backgrounds.
When we refer to individual photos in your group, it will help to have a number. It is not too late to edit your post and add number inbetween the pics. (Part of Steady's tips, I'm guessing).
Cute set of photos, I really like the comp on #4 and #9, not sure I would have taken the color down that much but if that is what the mom wanted, so be it. Great job, thanks for sharing!