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p.1 #1 · Treman State Park + Revision

After leaving the New England area this fall, we ventured to the Finger Lakes area of NY.

Treman State Park is situated on the outskirts of Ithaca. It offers numerous waterfalls in beautiful surroundings. This particular scene is adjacent to the site of an old gristmill, as the water was used for its main source of power.

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Revision (Less Sharpening). Any better?

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Cheers,
Ed

Edited on Nov 05, 2009 at 11:12 AM · View previous versions

Nov 05, 2009 at 12:37 AM

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p.1 #2 · Treman State Park + Revision

very nice ed, i didn't make it to here this time. it has a painterly look probably because the leaves are sharp!

Nov 05, 2009 at 03:33 AM

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p.1 #3 · Treman State Park + Revision

Ed

Beautiful image really like the multiple Falls and the zig zag you have captured here. Very nice choice of shutter speed as you have some very nice detail in the flowing water, nice work here Ed.

Ray Still

Nov 05, 2009 at 03:47 AM

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p.1 #4 · Treman State Park + Revision

Your treatment of the water is fabulous, the leaves a great detail and the greenery finish off an excellent piece of work.

Rich

Nov 05, 2009 at 04:06 AM

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p.1 #5 · Treman State Park + Revision

A very well composed shot Ed, and as said, has great flow and is nicely exposed for the best motion. I'm sure printed this would a super shot, here it's a tad over sharpened, imho.

Nov 05, 2009 at 04:26 AM

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p.1 #6 · Treman State Park + Revision

Great scene and comp and it looks like a nice exposure but the sharpening is pretty far over the top as I see this on my monitor.

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Nov 05, 2009 at 04:57 AM

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p.1 #7 · Treman State Park + Revision

I must agree, it is seems very much oversharpened to a point where you lose the richness of the colours. The scene is great, must a bit less would be more here.
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Nov 05, 2009 at 06:54 AM

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p.1 #8 · Treman State Park + Revision

Beautiful comp Ed. The water looks great but I have to agree on the over sharpening.

Mike

Nov 05, 2009 at 10:38 AM

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p.1 #9 · Treman State Park + Revision

I have posted a revision that I hope corrected the over sharpening problem. I edited that using my laptop. And, I thought that it might be kind of iffy.

Please let me know if it looks better.

Thanks for all the help on this.

Cheers,
Ed

Nov 05, 2009 at 10:54 AM

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p.1 #10 · Treman State Park + Revision

Hello Ed, a nice, contained scene. A suggestion on sharpening - view at 200%, click Preview off and on as you increase sharpening in small steps, when you just begin to see a difference the image is sharpened enough for the web.

hugh

Nov 05, 2009 at 11:02 AM

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p.1 #11 · Treman State Park + Revision

YES!
Much better Ed!

Nov 05, 2009 at 04:23 PM

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p.1 #12 · Treman State Park + Revision

Yes, much nicer. Lovely scene!

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Nov 06, 2009 at 02:17 PM

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p.1 #13 · Treman State Park + Revision

The water looks like fluid lead, it suits well to the intense green.
Karl

Nov 06, 2009 at 08:19 PM


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