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ScaryFox
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p.1 #1 · Guitarist


This is my favourite from a studio shoot that we did at the weekend. I am very new to studio work and would appreciate some feedback.
Thanks, Ute



Nov 02, 2009 at 04:04 PM
Gene Schilling
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p.1 #2 · Guitarist


There should be some fill on the lower half of the guitar, the blacks are clipping and therefore losing signficant detail. Also, your logo in the bottom right draws the eye away from the guitar. Nice exposure on the face.


Nov 02, 2009 at 04:27 PM
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p.1 #3 · Guitarist


Some light thrown onto the BG may separate him and the instrument from it. It would give some depth to the image. I like the sunglasses in the shot - nice touch.


Nov 02, 2009 at 04:45 PM
ScaryFox
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p.1 #4 · Guitarist


Thanks for your help here, that is much appreciated!
Ute



Nov 03, 2009 at 09:08 AM
Steady Hand
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p.1 #5 · Guitarist


Hi Ute,

I think you did pretty good for being new at studio work.

The pose is not bad, the light on the skin is not bad, I can see the man separated from the BG and the full figure is shown.

Not bad.

We all learn by trying.

Good to see you posting here in the People forum too.



Nov 03, 2009 at 09:14 AM
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p.1 #6 · Guitarist


Thanks, Steady. I always enjoy your feedback.
Yes, lots to learn but we all start somewhere!
Ute



Nov 04, 2009 at 04:27 AM





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