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p.1 #1 · Sweden Hockey with public


Feedback what I can do better?

http://msun.se/foto/ohk30okt09/ohk30okt09_01.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk30okt09/ohk30okt09_03.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk30okt09/ohk30okt09_09.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk16okt09/ohk16okt09_02.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk16okt09/ohk16okt09_19.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk16okt09/ohk16okt09_37.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk16okt09/ohk16okt09_39.jpg

http://msun.se/foto/ohk16okt09/ohk16okt09_43.jpg



Nov 01, 2009 at 06:44 AM
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p.1 #2 · Sweden Hockey with public


It may be just me but 2 and 3 look a little too saturated. Other than that I really like the action shots, but you may want to crop tighter (that's what everyone has been telling me ) Of your shots I think 5 and 7 are the best. Really cool shots of the fans and stuff!


Nov 01, 2009 at 01:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · Sweden Hockey with public


Some seem ok but a lot of them seem really contrasty particularly the first three.

I like the last shot.



Nov 01, 2009 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #4 · Sweden Hockey with public


Thanks for feedback!

Ok I will fix better saturated and contrast next time.



Nov 01, 2009 at 04:12 PM
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p.1 #5 · Sweden Hockey with public


bryutas wrote:
Some seem ok but a lot of them seem really contrasty particularly the first three.


+1 ... yeah definitely not the easiest jersey setup there to capture, but there's literally no detail in the black portions of the dark team's jerseys. A little overheated and a little over-contrasty, IMHO.

Some good action in there. The second crowd shot, despite being a little blurry, conveys a good sense of the enthusiasm for the game, so I like it.

I just think the levels could be tweaked better - likely in-cam.



Nov 01, 2009 at 05:20 PM





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