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Nice color and clarity, but I'm not in love with the crops. I usually like the tight crops, but the composition on these are a little off. See below...
1) should be a vertical crop with a little more of the body.
2) I like the tight aspects, but want to see more up top.
3) This one might be better looser. If he's getting some air, I'd like to see the height off the ground. If you don't have it, then I would crop out the ref. It's a little busy in the scene.
4) Very poor crop. Too much deadspace up top and feet cut off.
5) This could benefit looser too. Too many hacked pieces.
6) This wouldn't be a keeper for me. No ball, too tight, and face is OOF
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