Archive 2009 · another self :/

daverowe
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p.1 #1 · another self :/

yet again... boredom sets in. haha. tried creating a frame with my arm for a different look. we'll see if it works. C & C welcomed and much appreciated. thanks, david

edit...different version...

http://daverowephotography.zenfolio.com/img/v5/p769817802-5.jpg

thanks for looking, david.

Oct 31, 2009 at 01:43 AM

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p.1 #2 · another self :/

Hi David,

I have to be brief...

You are making nice SPs. Keep it up!

Nice expression.

I like the composition

The thread over your eye is a distraction.

Consider converting to BW.

I hope these comments help and encourage you.

Oct 31, 2009 at 04:10 AM

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p.1 #3 · another self :/

Not a fan of the shadows, and yes the thread over the eye is distracting.

Oct 31, 2009 at 08:06 AM

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p.1 #4 · another self :/

then again, it is also 'artsy'. love the effect.

Oct 31, 2009 at 08:41 AM

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p.1 #5 · another self :/

squareeyez wrote:
then again, it is also 'artsy'. love the effect.

Shhhhhhh....if anyone hears that.....you may start a new trend....

Oct 31, 2009 at 08:50 AM

daverowe
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p.1 #6 · another self :/

thanks guys.haha...i would hate to be the guy to change everything

Oct 31, 2009 at 06:59 PM

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p.1 #7 · another self :/

Steady Hand wrote:
Hi David,

I have to be brief...

You are making nice SPs. Keep it up!

Nice expression.

I like the composition

The thread over your eye is a distraction.

Consider converting to BW.

I hope these comments help and encourage you.

Nov 05, 2009 at 12:16 PM

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p.1 #8 · another self :/

I like the thread over the eye. Its slight annoyance creates the mystery factor, and builds up this (your) character. The PP and harsh light are appropriate for this shot.

Nov 05, 2009 at 08:04 PM

daverowe
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p.1 #9 · another self :/

thanks for the feedback dylan. i too like the shadow for this mood.

Nov 05, 2009 at 10:23 PM


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