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p.1 #1 · Painterly Yosemite

From last weekend. As always, C&C are most welcome.
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Oct 26, 2009 at 04:44 PM

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p.1 #2 · Painterly Yosemite

I really like number 1 and 2. three looks a little out of focus to me.

Oct 26, 2009 at 06:55 PM

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p.1 #3 · Painterly Yosemite

It could be my monitor, but all of them look way over-saturated. The compositions are great, though.

Oct 26, 2009 at 07:01 PM

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p.1 #4 · Painterly Yosemite

gkopp1999 wrote:
It could be my monitor, but all of them look way over-saturated. The compositions are great, though.

I take that back, by looking at the title of the post, I believe this is the look that the OP was going for. Nice job

Oct 26, 2009 at 07:07 PM

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p.1 #5 · Painterly Yosemite

These views are fab Bob - I enjoyed them emmensely

David

Oct 26, 2009 at 08:10 PM

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p.1 #6 · Painterly Yosemite

gkopp1999 wrote:
gkopp1999 wrote:
It could be my monitor, but all of them look way over-saturated. The compositions are great, though.

I take that back, by looking at the title of the post, I believe this is the look that the OP was going for. Nice job

You got it right. The scene was colorful in fall. Thanks to digital process, right away I saw the painting.

Oct 26, 2009 at 08:27 PM

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p.1 #7 · Painterly Yosemite

Beautiful captures here the elegant Fall colors and beautiful reflections really make this a series that is very pleasing to stare at for a long while, nice work

Ray Still

Oct 26, 2009 at 09:09 PM

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p.1 #8 · Painterly Yosemite

Hey Bob,

Looks like a beautiful weekend! Thanks for letting me know what I missed as I was spending lonely time away in the middle of Nevada!

#1 is nice, I love the clouds. It seems a bit over sharpened, and I would crop off the dead grass at the bottom. Although that would help in a way to seperate it from #3, I think the grass at the bottom just contradicts the brightness and life in the rest of the scene.

#2 is really cool. But use the warp tool, and pull the upper left hand corner up and get rid of that tiny bit of tree trunks showing. It's my favorite shot here, it's really beautiful with that foreground, so fix it up nice for me would you?

#3 Is pretty nice looking, but 2 things I would do, crop a bit off the left side. That dark half round shadow that's right on the edge on the left is distracting with being on the edge like that. Also, it has a bit of a feel of using an ND grad on this, with the way the sky darkens, and even the darkening seen on El Cap. I would maybe do a reverse digital ND grad and brighten up just a bit that upper portion of this shot. If you did it digitally, then go back and undo it...

You got some great shots here. At least for me, just a bit more work and these can be sitting in a gallery somewhere!

Jim

Oct 26, 2009 at 09:10 PM

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p.1 #9 · Painterly Yosemite

Nice. I don't know how I feel about the second one, maybe if the top was cropped below the far bank.

Oct 26, 2009 at 09:13 PM

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p.1 #10 · Painterly Yosemite

Abiciriderback wrote:
Beautiful captures here the elegant Fall colors and beautiful reflections really make this a series that is very pleasing to stare at for a long while, nice work

Ray Still

Ray, I have been here many falls, but the clouds never cooperated until this time when I didn't expect nor hope. I just sit there to enjoy the scenery, watching other tourists clicking their P&S then go on their way. With the camera in the car when suddenly I saw the white stuff gliding in. I ran and graped the camera....

Oct 26, 2009 at 10:45 PM

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p.1 #11 · Painterly Yosemite

Great scenes - how come everyone else gets the great clouds at that iconic Valley view and I don't?

I'll cast my vote with some of those who mentioned that the saturation and processing seem a bit strong - though that is certainly a matter of taste.

Take care,

Dan

Oct 26, 2009 at 11:15 PM

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p.1 #12 · Painterly Yosemite

JimFox wrote:
Hey Bob,

Looks like a beautiful weekend! Thanks for letting me know what I missed as I was spending lonely time away in the middle of Nevada!

#1 is nice, I love the clouds. It seems a bit over sharpened, and I would crop off the dead grass at the bottom. Although that would help in a way to seperate it from #3, I think the grass at the bottom just contradicts the brightness and life in the rest of the scene.

Jim

Thanks Jim for the fine analysis. Here I try to "correct" the dark shadow on the left corner keeping uncropped the rocks I really like. I think it add to the composition.
About the grass, I am trying to save it thinking it adds to the depth (3D) of the image but I also lightened it a bit. Let me know how you like th new version.
Bob

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Oct 27, 2009 at 12:26 AM

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p.1 #13 · Painterly Yosemite

gdanmitchell wrote:
Great scenes - how come everyone else gets the great clouds at that iconic Valley view and I don't?

I'll cast my vote with some of those who mentioned that the saturation and processing seem a bit strong - though that is certainly a matter of taste.

Take care,

Dan

Dan as I said:"Ray, I have been here many falls, but the clouds never cooperated until this time when I didn't expect nor hope."
I don't know where you live, but my home is about 90 min from Yosemite valley.
California is famous for clear blue sky, no clouds! no joke!

Oct 27, 2009 at 12:33 AM

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p.1 #14 · Painterly Yosemite

My drive is about 3.5 hours I'm afraid...

... but I can shoot redwoods and seascapes and be home for lunch. :-)

Dan

Oct 27, 2009 at 02:37 AM

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p.1 #15 · Painterly Yosemite

Love the clouds and the deep blues of the sky. Looks like you had a nice afternoon Bob.

Jim

Oct 27, 2009 at 03:16 AM

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p.1 #16 · Painterly Yosemite

love these

Oct 27, 2009 at 05:26 AM

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p.1 #17 · Painterly Yosemite

Jim Sanderson wrote:
Love the clouds and the deep blues of the sky. Looks like you had a nice afternoon Bob.

Jim

Jim,
It was sunny and pure blue sky. I spend most of the time shooting leaves, that were already damaged by the rain/storm. The clouds were unexpected bonuses just before I headed for home.
Bob

Oct 27, 2009 at 11:33 AM

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p.1 #18 · Painterly Yosemite

emreese wrote:
love these

Thanks for visiting.
Bob

Oct 27, 2009 at 04:22 PM

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p.1 #19 · Painterly Yosemite

Love the 2nd shot. Well done.

Nov 05, 2009 at 02:09 AM

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p.1 #20 · Painterly Yosemite

The lighting in these is amazing.

Nov 05, 2009 at 05:09 AM

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p.1 #21 · Painterly Yosemite

A- to look at when not screened at work- bump

Bob

Nov 05, 2009 at 05:20 AM

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p.1 #22 · Painterly Yosemite

Very nice, even though nthey are a bit over saturated. I recommend to fix the dust spots on the sensor (#1 and #3 in the sky / clouds over Bridalvail).

- Heinz

Nov 05, 2009 at 05:34 AM

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p.1 #23 · Painterly Yosemite

The way conditions always ought to be, but rarely are. Excellent scenes, and captures.

Nov 05, 2009 at 05:34 AM

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p.1 #24 · Painterly Yosemite

The deep blue sky is gorgeous in this! Very nice clear reflection in #2. These are extremely creative.

Nov 05, 2009 at 08:02 PM

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p.1 #25 · Painterly Yosemite

lovely warm light bob, yes i do agree with heinz about the sensor dirt!

Nov 05, 2009 at 09:30 PM


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