There's something a bit mottled and perhaps foggy about the sky. It could benefit from being darker. Also, if the upper foliage was darker it might add to the visual contrast and improve the image.
J, mostly he left the joy out of it. "... But this only adds to the joy and glory of the climb."
Oh, I understood your comment. My reply was simply to supply what was omitted for any who were curious.
Many years ago I made my living as a portrait photographer and I know there are some subjects want all their bits in every photo. Others are happier with much tighter framing. Personally, I don't subscribe to the school that demands to see all the fingers and toes. I don't mind cutting off feet or a hand here and there in people photos. Often an image can be stronger for it. Without seeing the full original scene, we can't know whether seeing all the inscription would also require a weaker composition.