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A few things caught my eye. On your portfolio page, there's an ad for the FREE software that you used to create your portfolio. Tacky. Pay the $$ to buy the software or whatever it takes to get rid of the ad. Otherwise you're projecting an image that is NOT professional.
Also on the same page, you come right out and disclose that you are not an expert. Why do that? To someone, they might see those photos and think they're EXCELLENT. You're trying to build up interest, not kill it on the spot. Also, you don't have to mention that some of your photos are several years old. No need to tell them that, either.
Also, you need more than 2 pictures in a category. Otherwise, get rid of the category.
The kid photos are good, except for the first and last one. They're the weakest of the bunch, IMO, and it drags the rest down. First one: Line going through the kids head. Last one: No interaction with baby and the kiddo has a weird expression/look to him/her.
Oh, on your home page... You say you were "hooked on" photography. I would suggest using a different word, such as captivated or attracted. But that's just me.
And your current Twitter feed says you've got some equipment out for repair. That's not what I want to really hear if I'm looking for a photographer. I want to know that she or he has everything ready and set to go.
Remember, IMAGE is everything and first impressions are important. Your website could be the first thing someone sees about you (like me!). My first impression from your website: You're not really sure of yourself.
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