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Archive 2009 · Weekend Series

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Weekend Series


Series taken over the 4th...father and son fishing on neighborhood lake.

All c&c welcome...


#1
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/July_4_Fish_1.jpg

#2
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/July_4_Fish1_5.jpg

#3
http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/July_4_Fish_2.jpg

regards,

Bob



Jul 07, 2009 at 08:21 PM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #2 · Weekend Series


#2 and #3 are more interesting compositions. #3 has a better balance between light and color.


Jul 07, 2009 at 09:25 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #3 · Weekend Series


Kaden,

Thanks for the comments.

Taking a fresh look, I see marked differences across the three re pp'ing. Guess I ought to learn how to batch some global adjustments.

Overall, the images probably have little interest except for the two individuals, who, unfortunately are strangers. And, I must learn the range limitations of what is possible with that lens (80-200, f2.8) it's not a 300-400, no matter how much I want it to be.

regards,

Bob



Jul 08, 2009 at 07:56 AM
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p.1 #4 · Weekend Series


3 is the best.
Prefer the light/color as Kaden said.
More direct interaction between father and son with their looking at each other. Levels looks better and less of an issue around clipping highlights.

Scott



Jul 08, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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p.1 #5 · Weekend Series


I definitely like #3 the best, if only because you can see the father's face. The light balance is also much better in the third photograph.


Jul 08, 2009 at 12:21 PM
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p.1 #6 · Weekend Series


Scott, ternus

Thanks for looking and the comments, #3 it is.

Bob



Jul 08, 2009 at 01:58 PM





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