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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Weekend Series

Series taken over the 4th...father and son fishing on neighborhood lake.

All c&c welcome...

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regards,

Bob

Jul 08, 2009 at 01:21 AM

Kaden K.
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p.1 #2 · Weekend Series

#2 and #3 are more interesting compositions. #3 has a better balance between light and color.

Jul 08, 2009 at 02:25 AM

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p.1 #3 · Weekend Series

Kaden,

Thanks for the comments.

Taking a fresh look, I see marked differences across the three re pp'ing. Guess I ought to learn how to batch some global adjustments.

Overall, the images probably have little interest except for the two individuals, who, unfortunately are strangers. And, I must learn the range limitations of what is possible with that lens (80-200, f2.8) it's not a 300-400, no matter how much I want it to be.

regards,

Bob

Jul 08, 2009 at 12:56 PM

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p.1 #4 · Weekend Series

3 is the best.
Prefer the light/color as Kaden said.
More direct interaction between father and son with their looking at each other. Levels looks better and less of an issue around clipping highlights.

Scott

Jul 08, 2009 at 03:06 PM

ternus
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p.1 #5 · Weekend Series

I definitely like #3 the best, if only because you can see the father's face. The light balance is also much better in the third photograph.

Jul 08, 2009 at 05:21 PM

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p.1 #6 · Weekend Series

Scott, ternus

Thanks for looking and the comments, #3 it is.

Bob

Jul 08, 2009 at 06:58 PM


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