Archive 2009 · Katie

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p.1 #1 · Katie

Hello to all, I�m first time poster and new in photography and still trying to figure things out. Would love to hear your critique and comments. Thanks, I appreciate your help.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2004-4/700293/123456.jpg

Jul 04, 2009 at 01:36 AM

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p.1 #2 · Katie

Nice smile, is she about to rip the camera away from you? =D
Welcome to FM, and thanks for sharing. (reminds me to go and take some pictures)

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Jul 04, 2009 at 01:44 AM

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p.1 #3 · Katie

Seems a little soft. And quite red. Not sure if she was going for a snarl or a smile.
But pretty model and the bokeh in the background is nice

Jul 04, 2009 at 01:46 AM

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p.1 #4 · Katie

If you backed up and zoomed in she wouldn't be so soft, because of shallow depth of field. The wide open lens didn't help either.

Jul 04, 2009 at 09:10 PM

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p.1 #5 · Katie

Is that what you wanted? A rescue job? Or did you want to learn how to take it in the first place?

Jul 05, 2009 at 06:57 AM

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p.1 #6 · Katie

Quick thoughts:

*Pic has a bad magenta cast to it. Look at calibrating and white balance.
*Exif shows 1/3200, 3.2 and ISO 1000. Keeping aperture where it is, dial down your ISO (you had ALOT of room) and get rid of that noise.
*Ignoring color issues and noise, good snapshot

Jul 05, 2009 at 07:27 PM

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p.1 #7 · Katie

I like it much better without the hand there. I'd just crop it to a headshot. As above, drop the ISO. Looks sharp enough on the eyes for me. Nice shot, color could use a little work, but nothin major.

Jul 05, 2009 at 10:05 PM


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