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p.1 #1 · Hazy Crazy


http://www.shutterfreaks.com/gallery21/main.php/d/71221-1/Bluffs2009B_amp_WFoggyWebfinal.jpg


Jul 02, 2009 at 01:53 PM
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p.1 #2 · Hazy Crazy


I like it. The dark tones of the bridge contrast nicely with the lighter, hazy tones of the background.


Jul 02, 2009 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · Hazy Crazy


if you can't have a cloudy sky, haze/fog is nice for atmosphere . . .
I like the way you composed the scene - the low angel of the bridge leads nicely to the hill side.
regards, tom



Jul 02, 2009 at 03:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · Hazy Crazy


Great one. I gives thumbs up on the toning here.
-Tim



Jul 02, 2009 at 07:16 PM
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p.1 #5 · Hazy Crazy


A beautifully classic B&W shot Steven.

T



Jul 02, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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p.1 #6 · Hazy Crazy


Thanks, everyone, still not happy with this one, can't really put my finger on it. What can be done to improve this one?


Jul 03, 2009 at 04:53 PM
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p.1 #7 · Hazy Crazy


Hey Steve, I'll give you my impression

Anyways, I love the mistiness and the toning you did in this shot. It does give that "dreamy" look... and you achieve it very well.

However, the shot is not perfectly symmetrical, with the little bridge being a little leaning on the left. And I feel that the background is a little busy if the attention is on the bridge.

My 2 cents

eric



Jul 04, 2009 at 09:10 AM
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p.1 #8 · Hazy Crazy


Thanks, Eric, your points are well taken.


Jul 04, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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p.1 #9 · Hazy Crazy


Very nice comp, the bridge works so well at leading the eye. very nice conversion and toning here.

Ray Still



Jul 04, 2009 at 12:00 PM
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p.1 #10 · Hazy Crazy


Steven - what a wonderful image and mood. Fantastic!

Byron



Jul 05, 2009 at 02:02 PM
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p.1 #11 · Hazy Crazy


Steven, I like this one. It has an "old school" look that I admire a lot!

You ask what could be done to improve it, and it's hard to come up with anything. I do kind of wonder if darkening the hills so that the bridge and plants to the sides of the bridge are framed a bit more, if that would give it more of a focus point. Just a thought, and don't know if it would work or not. That said, I still like this shot a lot.



Jul 05, 2009 at 06:39 PM
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p.1 #12 · Hazy Crazy


Extraordinary mood.

m



Jul 06, 2009 at 04:20 AM
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p.1 #13 · Hazy Crazy


Thanks, Ray, appeciated.


Jul 06, 2009 at 07:56 AM





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