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p.1 #1 · Assistant Chief

Just adding this to my portfolio. Your comments will be appreciate.

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Maybe this is better......

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Tom Makofski

http://tmak26.zenfolio.com/p699515171

Edited on Jul 01, 2009 at 10:28 PM · View previous versions

Jul 01, 2009 at 10:06 PM

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p.1 #2 · Assistant Chief

he looks winded

the whole shot looks a little washed out to me?

Jul 01, 2009 at 10:14 PM

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p.1 #3 · Assistant Chief

Portfolio for what? Would like it to show him with his mouth close and doing something else. Maybe looking at a fire. Working with his crew and showing himself as a leader. Stuff like that. Depends on your portfolio though. Who is your crowd?

Chris

Jul 01, 2009 at 11:08 PM

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p.1 #4 · Assistant Chief

Second image IS better.

Jul 01, 2009 at 11:26 PM

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p.1 #5 · Assistant Chief

Nice picture of Assistant Chief Sippin.

Jul 02, 2009 at 02:15 AM

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p.1 #6 · Assistant Chief

Number 2 for me aswell.

Jul 02, 2009 at 01:13 PM

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p.1 #7 · Assistant Chief

much better

Jul 02, 2009 at 01:54 PM

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p.1 #8 · Assistant Chief

Both are really good. I think the mouth open shows the tension that one would expect at a working fire. The photos convey that he is at a working fire and not a posed photo.
Very well done.
Ray

Jul 02, 2009 at 03:24 PM

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p.1 #9 · Assistant Chief

Oh yes, at this point he very much IS working the fire. Look into his eyes! What is missing in the sign is the heat and humidity that we had during the fire!

Tom

Jul 02, 2009 at 04:10 PM

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p.1 #10 · Assistant Chief

#2 is better - first one looks like it has a bit of haze.

Jul 06, 2009 at 01:45 PM

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p.1 #11 · Assistant Chief

I would increase the contrast even more.

Jul 06, 2009 at 03:57 PM

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p.1 #12 · Assistant Chief

Looks to me that he is in the middle of a yawn or the start of a sneeze...I 'd look for a better image. But #2 looks better.

Jul 06, 2009 at 05:28 PM

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p.1 #13 · Assistant Chief

His face is just about centered, and the overall feeling of the image composition feels a little flat IMHO. I think you could crop the ladder off the left side, making it a square crop, and a little more intimate, and stronger overall.

Jul 06, 2009 at 06:18 PM


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