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lemon lime

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Jun 14, 2009 at 07:17 PM

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p.1 #2 · #349 lemon lime

I like the close-up and the composition, but I think it would be helped by a greater DOF. I'd like to see more of it in focus - especially that top part closest to the viewer.
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~ Carrol

Jun 15, 2009 at 02:25 PM

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p.1 #3 · #349 lemon lime

Hi Laura,

I love the colors and this is a great idea, but I agree with Carol about the greater depth of field. I would like to see the pistil or stamen or both in clear focus. But that is just my taste, it is an interesting abstract as is.

Jun 15, 2009 at 11:36 PM

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p.1 #4 · #349 lemon lime

Hi guys, thanks very much for looking and your input!

Yes, I wonder what it would look like with some more DOF as well. This was what I managed to get handheld, before the light disappeared, and before I could see if my tripod would fit the camera position. I'll take the abstract route on this one!

Paul

Jun 16, 2009 at 07:54 PM

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p.1 #5 · #349 lemon lime

Very unusual DoF. Not sure, but I do like different.

Chad

Jun 17, 2009 at 04:21 AM

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p.1 #6 · #349 lemon lime

Carrol wrote:
I like the close-up and the composition, but I think it would be helped by a greater DOF. I'd like to see more of it in focus - especially that top part closest to the viewer.
Regards,
~ Carrol

My thinking exactly. A lot of potential which was not fully materialized.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.

Jun 17, 2009 at 08:10 PM


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