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Archive 2009 · #343 Buying in Bulk

  
 
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p.1 #1 · #343 Buying in Bulk


With our two university-age kids home for the summer and a teenager in high school as well, we tend to buy in bulk. I opened a cupboard today and spotted this abstract.

http://www.teglis.com/photo/fm/wa/343-granola-bars.jpg

Comments and suggestions are always welcome.

Thanks for looking,
Rich



May 01, 2009 at 08:01 PM
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p.1 #2 · #343 Buying in Bulk


I'd say it looks like a good abstract, nice colors Nit picks... the exposure seems to fall off at the upper left and is brightest at the lower right/center. Was this intended? If so, no worries. If not, more indirect or diffused lighting will help. Of course, maybe I'm just crazy or its my s$%^&! monitor.


May 03, 2009 at 12:11 AM
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p.1 #3 · #343 Buying in Bulk


Well seen. I like it.


May 03, 2009 at 05:50 PM
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p.1 #4 · #343 Buying in Bulk


Great abstract ! A bit hard (for me) to guess it's food though...

Julien



May 04, 2009 at 06:12 PM
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p.1 #5 · #343 Buying in Bulk


Nice color and the angle of the packages gives it a dynamic lift.


May 05, 2009 at 01:43 AM
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p.1 #6 · #343 Buying in Bulk


dancam wrote:
I'd say it looks like a good abstract, nice colors Nit picks... the exposure seems to fall off at the upper left and is brightest at the lower right/center. Was this intended? If so, no worries. If not, more indirect or diffused lighting will help. Of course, maybe I'm just crazy or its my s$%^&! monitor.


Thanks for your comment. I think you're right about the exposure, but it's subtle enough that it doesn't bother me.



May 05, 2009 at 08:57 AM
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p.1 #7 · #343 Buying in Bulk


Klaus Priebe wrote:
Well seen. I like it.


Thank-you Klaus.

-- Rich



May 05, 2009 at 08:58 AM
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p.1 #8 · #343 Buying in Bulk


markoner wrote:
Great abstract ! A bit hard (for me) to guess it's food though...

Julien


Well, it's a box of individually-wrapped granola bars (talk about wasteful packaging).

Thanks for your comment.

-- Rich



May 05, 2009 at 08:59 AM
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p.1 #9 · #343 Buying in Bulk


AuntiPode wrote:
Nice color and the angle of the packages gives it a dynamic lift.


Thank-you for your kind comment Karen.

-- Rich



May 05, 2009 at 09:00 AM





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