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p.2 #13 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing | |
Jeremy, love your lighting and PP.
Not sure if the numbering sequence is changing, I hope everything matches up.
1) I like it a lot but I'd like it better if she looked into the moment and not aware of the camera
3) I like the expressions here and it's kinder to his chin than 2
5) She looks good, natural, his body language just looks stiff and wrong to me
6) My first reaction to this was very positive, then little things started to bother me, his chin, the tilt, so much of his stomach area
7b) I love everything about this, the lines behind work in this for me
9) Great everything about this but the thing behind them. Her face! Perfect. Their body language, LOVE it.
12) My favorite. You nailed this one to me.
13) I like it a lot. Wish her hands weren't just hanging there.
14)Great expression on him
I've never had the ambition to do this kind of work, but you are making it look fun, hmmm, I don't think I could pull off the required directing.
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