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Looking for feedback on the B&W images. The others here are hit and miss, but I'm just posting as I edit. Thanks hotties!

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Apr 14, 2009 at 05:08 PM

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p.1 #2 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

processing looks spot on to me... fun shot

Apr 14, 2009 at 05:34 PM

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p.1 #3 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

*added one*.

Is a single shot just too much of a snooze? Is that shot itself (now the second one) a bore? Is it cows**t? I want to know if it's stinky. Spare no insults, profanities, whatever!

Apr 14, 2009 at 07:13 PM

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p.1 #4 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

1st shot is fine, a loving couple. The 2nd shot is just plain fun, with the props and look on the woman's face I imagine 'Oh no we are not having Karaoke at our wedding dear' oh and as usual your lighting is spot on. When are YOU planning to give a lighting clinic to us less fortunate members in the Tdot.

Apr 14, 2009 at 07:22 PM

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p.1 #5 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

The second shot rocks man... the first one I no like.

With the multiple shadows and the striped shirt, it just makes my eyes go crazy.
Then the odd comp of cutting across his chin and her eye... just doesn't work for me man.

Peace.

Apr 14, 2009 at 07:33 PM

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p.1 #6 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

hey Jeremy.. always love your stuff. I agree the first one has a few competing lines & shadows, maybe a B&W would help it a bit.

For the 2nd - I really dig it. Personally I would of loved to have seen it from more of a front angle so the power lines aren't going thru her head. With that awesome wall & scrub grass setting, I would of played that up more (but that's just me and we've already identified the fact I suck.

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Apr 14, 2009 at 07:42 PM

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p.1 #7 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

awesome set up on #2

Apr 14, 2009 at 07:59 PM

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p.1 #8 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

only 2 shots? boooo

Apr 14, 2009 at 08:17 PM

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p.1 #9 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

hmm i actually really like the first shot unlike what others have mentioned. Looks like a jewelry ad..and the second one is definitely a fun one. I know you mentioned you're not on your regular monitor, but the blacks on this one is too black..

well i'm also no on my regular monitor soo it might look better on others =) carryon then..

::conrad::

Apr 14, 2009 at 08:25 PM

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p.1 #10 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Quan wrote:
only 2 shots? boooo

x3 now. *bump*. Any cows**t? Thank you all for the comments so far, will def. be rechecking the values of the final images when the new lcd gets in tomorrow.

Apr 14, 2009 at 08:35 PM

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p.1 #11 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

pics look good

the third pic, feels like the dudes head shouldn't be getting clipped.

and the tag is distracting throughout. reduce size of it by like 30%

Apr 14, 2009 at 08:49 PM

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p.1 #12 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

#1 I find the lines of his shirt too distracting. Don't like the comp.

LOVE #2 & #3b. Amazing lighting to make them look like a fashion shoot.

#3a agree with above, the crop above his head seems too tight.

Apr 14, 2009 at 08:55 PM

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p.1 #13 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Crop is a fashion thing, not to everyone's taste for sure. May change that before it goes to the blog, thanks. The client will be getting it at full as below.

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Apr 14, 2009 at 08:59 PM

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p.1 #14 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

even as a fashion shot. seems like either clip him or dont.

also, it's the designer in me, but that tag needs screaming to be kerned properly :P

look at the spacing between the f and a, a and s in fash. and spacing between the e and s and in sess. close those things up. as a teacher of mine used to say, "you can drive a truck through there" :P

Apr 14, 2009 at 09:02 PM

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p.1 #15 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

funkdoobi wrote:
even as a fashion shot. seems like either clip him or dont.

also, it's the designer in me, but that tag needs screaming to be kerned properly :P

look at the spacing between the f and a, a and s in fash. and spacing between the e and s and in sess. close those things up. as a teacher of mine used to say, "you can drive a truck through there" :P

I'm gonna leave him for now I think, will try some less and more severe crops tho. Kerning on the type is a great idea (I always hated typography in GD lol), will have to do that. The kerning is definite cows**t as it is.

Apr 14, 2009 at 09:11 PM

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p.1 #16 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Stunning shots, on no.3 i wouldnt mind the crop if it was *obviously* mean to be cropped, the trim of the hair just doesnt work for me, love the full shot though.

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Rowan

Apr 14, 2009 at 09:14 PM

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p.1 #17 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

lighting setup? one large softbox opposite the sun?

Apr 15, 2009 at 03:42 AM

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p.1 #18 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Dudes got chin city in the first shot along with his portrait. Trouble with that is, he's not even fat. I say, "give me a long neck" at least 8 times during a session. Of the 4 shots here I like 2 and her portrait. 2 is gold. 3 is silver. 1 is lead.

~Sam

Apr 15, 2009 at 05:58 AM

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p.1 #19 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

bwcat wrote:
#1 I find the lines of his shirt too distracting. Don't like the comp.

Agreed!

Apr 15, 2009 at 12:00 PM

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p.1 #20 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Sam Hassas wrote:
Dudes got chin city in the first shot along with his portrait. Trouble with that is, he's not even fat. I say, "give me a long neck" at least 8 times during a session. Of the 4 shots here I like 2 and her portrait. 2 is gold. 3 is silver. 1 is lead.

~Sam

Thanks bro. Is 1 'horses**t' though

Apr 15, 2009 at 01:41 PM

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p.1 #21 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

jeremy_clay wrote:
Sam Hassas wrote:
Dudes got chin city in the first shot along with his portrait. Trouble with that is, he's not even fat. I say, "give me a long neck" at least 8 times during a session. Of the 4 shots here I like 2 and her portrait. 2 is gold. 3 is silver. 1 is lead.

~Sam

Thanks bro. Is 1 'horses**t' though

No, I would goes so far as to calling it horses**t. Maybe cats**t or mouses**t. Certainly not horses**t.

It's good up to the chin. It might even be salvaged if cropped.

`Sam

Apr 15, 2009 at 04:11 PM

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p.1 #22 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

I like the new crop on the guy shot best.

THIS is the lighting I was going for... I see the difference now. It's dramatic, but not so harsh. I gotta work on that.

Apr 15, 2009 at 04:15 PM

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p.1 #23 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Sam Hassas wrote:
jeremy_clay wrote:
Sam Hassas wrote:
Dudes got chin city in the first shot along with his portrait. Trouble with that is, he's not even fat. I say, "give me a long neck" at least 8 times during a session. Of the 4 shots here I like 2 and her portrait. 2 is gold. 3 is silver. 1 is lead.

~Sam

Thanks bro. Is 1 'horses**t' though

No, I would goes so far as to calling it horses**t. Maybe cats**t or mouses**t. Certainly not horses**t.

It's good up to the chin. It might even be salvaged if cropped.

`Sam

Will get on the chin(s) good sir, that I will. They seem to keep popping up:

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Apr 15, 2009 at 04:16 PM

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p.1 #24 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

Love those last two couple shots. I'd love to see more detail in their black upper garments in the car wash.

Apr 15, 2009 at 04:21 PM

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p.1 #25 · add mo' again, e-sesh thing

unblinkable wrote:
I like the new crop on the guy shot best.

THIS is the lighting I was going for... I see the difference now. It's dramatic, but not so harsh. I gotta work on that.

Did you happen to have any setup shots with how your light was set in that series mel?

Apr 15, 2009 at 04:23 PM


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