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Electron_Otaku
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p.1 #1 · Pine Cone

Still trying to figure this B&W thing out...

C&C is most welcome...

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Edited on Apr 09, 2009 at 07:55 AM · View previous versions

Apr 09, 2009 at 07:50 AM

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p.1 #2 · Pine Cone

Well that's a pretty good try

Cheers Ray

Apr 09, 2009 at 07:54 AM

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p.1 #3 · Pine Cone

thanks

any suggestions to improve things?

Apr 09, 2009 at 07:56 AM

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p.1 #4 · Pine Cone

I might try an almost square crop, leaving just a bit of dark space to the right of the cone (about the same as you have on the left). I might also try a mild vignetting (or burning in) to help tone down the needles near the edges of the shot and draw the eye toward the cone.

Apr 09, 2009 at 01:07 PM

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p.1 #5 · Pine Cone

I agree with JBurnett about the crop. It would also eliminate the "bulls-eye" thing, (which isn't a hard-and-fast rule, but generally helps compositionally).
IMO you've seen and captured a very nice piece of our natural world.
Good work.
Charlie

Apr 09, 2009 at 03:46 PM

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p.1 #6 · Pine Cone

thanks for the comments!

I will try them out and see what happens.

Apr 09, 2009 at 11:20 PM


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