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Zhang Lala

Apr 04, 2009 at 06:12 AM

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p.1 #2 · Revelation

Damn. This is gold. Perfect conversion, the light highlighting her face is gorgeous, great model. I love the composition and how the railing(s) lead your eyes upon second glance to her hands/gloves.

Apr 04, 2009 at 06:28 AM

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p.1 #3 · Revelation

Zhang Lala looks like your favourite model at the moment. Great shot.

Apr 04, 2009 at 06:31 AM

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p.1 #4 · Revelation

Fabulous composition and great concept François.

Not that it matters much, but when did you think to add the heavenly light, as you were shooting or during post?

Apr 04, 2009 at 07:57 AM

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p.1 #5 · Revelation

I think it would be very impressive if you cropped almost to her waist, so the railing diagonals would make a nice design. Crop a little off the top, too.

Apr 04, 2009 at 03:38 PM

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p.1 #6 · Revelation

I don't know where you found such a neat location with such a unique railing, but good job on taking advantage of it with her pose. This is quite dramatic, and I like it!

There is one minor quibble though; that ray of light you have there, it's quite obvious to my eye that it's a photoshop gradient mask. It has that look. I would personally break up that perfect straightness a bit with some manual brush strokes.

Otherwise, I'm liking this and I envy anyone who can do a model shoot out on location! It takes alot of effort to make it work.

Apr 04, 2009 at 07:14 PM

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p.1 #7 · Revelation

Thanks to all

I don't deny that the ray of light is artificial, Dubious. I kind of like that it looks fake; it brings ambiguity to the image. Making it look like a "real" ray of light would be equivocal, and I hate that

Apr 04, 2009 at 08:53 PM

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p.1 #8 · Revelation

I like very much!

Apr 04, 2009 at 09:48 PM

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p.1 #9 · Revelation

Absolutely jaw-dropping gorgeous.

Apr 05, 2009 at 02:11 AM


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