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Apr 03, 2009 at 06:59 PM
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p.1 #2 · old office


The processing fits the image. I don't like the chair angle in font and The square on shot. I think either move the chair out of the way or make its appearance seem more planned. Same thoughts on the board.

Very nice mood with the processing.

Scott



Apr 04, 2009 at 12:01 AM
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p.1 #3 · old office


this was in a museum and needed to keep elements out that detracted from the age of the office which was a 1920s-30s office at Boeing.


Apr 04, 2009 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · old office


I think it is great, nice 'period piece'.

Nits: If you shot RAW, I'd go back to try to recover some of the blocked up highlights - inbox, deskpad, etc. Maybe add a touch of 'grain' for an archival atmosphere.

regards,

Bob



Apr 05, 2009 at 09:08 AM
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p.1 #5 · old office


I like the subject matter and toning. Fits well.
The chair upfront bothers me. It belongs, but might not feel quite as cut off if you shot at a lower angle. I'd prefer to see more light and space under the desk, or less. Right now it feels like a very bright, somewhat distracting strip at the edge of the frame.

Scott



Apr 05, 2009 at 02:09 PM





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